An interesting alternate version. Here's to this couple. Thank you for your thoughts.

Oh pretty! Have I mentioned you do lovely poetic things with parentheses? And color imagery! Red droplets littering the floor, golden strands of silk, the vast white of the hospital room...but my favorite image is of him just holding her hand.

Aww really loved that. Great fanfic! Loved the Hcalness!

very nice, I like it. you could do a lot more with it, but its cool like this too.

I have to say I love this. The language was so simple, but it said so much at the same time. I like the way you've used the charachters emtions and they suit each char. Your summary was good also. Your story capitvated me.Well done!