That was really good.

shelter from the rain, lol. I love good I/Js with all my life and this is definitely a good one.

I just found this story and enjoyed every bit of it, like someone else said maybe you could write from Irina's side also. Great story.

This was really brilliant, and calls for Irina's view of those same events, I beg you

heh, awesome. Good characterization of Jack.