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Joshua Shinguji 4/17/04 . chapter 11
Great Fanfic.Keep it up...
It makes me cry
Yumemi 4/23/02 . chapter 11
nice! really liked it! _
PrinceRei 12/15/01 . chapter 10
Hey KCC Thought I had lost interest didn't you? Honestly School has been really hectic and I havn't had much time to read or write fics. Anyways This Chapter was just as good as your others(I skipped chapter 9 because I just got the game and don't want to spoil the whole Ayame thing). Anyways the highlite of this chapter was the whole 2 letters. Which is a very Sakura Thing to do... Sakura always says what she thinks but then because of her lack of self confidince retracts the statement... it makes sense this would follow into her writting. Anyways good work. And you can expect a new chapter for World Taisen 1 soon(I really mean it this time).
anon 10/3/01 . chapter 7
Okay... interesting... stuff...

Write more!
BikoNeko 9/1/01 . chapter 10
This fic is great! I only read Chapter 10: Sakura: If I Could Tell You, I Would Let You Know but I really like it! It's hard to explain why. I also like the fact that you've managed to write a story that has the facts and has a very good plot.
Tina 8/27/01 . chapter 5
I really love this fanfic... as much as i love sakura wars which is quite a lot

like the second ova, you allowed each character to reminisce their time together, as far as the writers are concern... you're probably one of them!

i love how you included little things they did together in here... like Sumire and Kanna's bet in the past, iris' childish qualities and the gentleness in each character towards each other...

i was planning to write a review at the end, when i finish all the chapters, however, i couldn't resist

the only problem i had with this chapter however, is the last part "for showing Sakura that we care about her and would do anything in our power for her" i'm not really sure what you meant by that...

but overall i really like this fanfic ( U )
RiKa1 7/27/01 . chapter 11
It's such a nice fic. The letters are very nice, especially when Leni-sama told Oogami-sama about the Eiffel Tower. Ganbaro, Kite-chan!
toto1 7/25/01 . chapter 11
What a great story..
PrinceRei 7/18/01 . chapter 8
Does Jean-Paul get a day/vote too? I love it. The Three daughters where well done. I've always hade a soft spot for Tsubaki and the others(they remind me of the bridge bunnies from Macross). I didn't like the Special-no-thank-you Desu line, it's a good line but you should have dropped the Desu, not many people know as much japanese as we do(though if they know any they know Desu). I liked this Chapter and i love to see that the fic has a continuing plot. Anyways this is really cool.
PrinceRei 7/18/01 . chapter 7
Well Kite i'm back and ready for more fic,(expect to see world Taisen one updated soon) What can i say about this chapter? Reni another ST 2 character that i don't really know. From what little i do now about Reni this is how i think she'd act. I'll stick to talking about your charcterization of Sumire and Sakura. Again you managed to achive that balance with Sumire we talked about before, and yes she does have a tendency to over shop(grins rembering ST TV episode 4(I think)). And again Sakura was very well done, exciteable, but very helpful. Another great chapter in a great fic.
Saturnnalia 7/13/01 . chapter 1
That was cute story! Write a sequel, please!
Tish-chan 6/22/01 . chapter 11
That was pretty good. Everyone missed Ohgami in their different ways...
Amphibius 6/15/01 . chapter 1
Though I'm not so familiar with the whole Sakura Wars mythos, I do have some idea of how the story went, so here's my review anyway...

What a great set of stories! The epistolary style was a refreshing way of keeping the whole body of the series unified. What would have been a monotonous structure to use as foundation was handled deftly and wisely resulting in a series of stories consistent yet distinct from one another. Each personality was well developed (IMHO) and the series did not so much suffer from being too much of a "talkie", not once did I get lost in figuring out who was talking to whom at any point. I was impressed with how well the characters were translated into the series, Sumire "sounded" very like herself (even the laugh!) and others did as well! I also appreciated how each chapter was very concise in its own way... this is not at all heavy reading and yet the content still bears so much depth to look into, a great balance indeed IMHO!

Well, guess that's it for my rambling! I hope to read more of your work in the future! :)
PrinceRei 6/13/01 . chapter 6
Is Roman holiday a real play? You handelled Sumire with the same grace you've managed with everyone else so far. The complicated balancing act of making Sumire arrogant on the outside but still soft on the inside. Of making her quarral with Kanna but still maintaing the fact that they are best friends. This is great stuff.
PrinceRei 6/13/01 . chapter 5
well i promised you something with more feedback for this chapter(you don't mind if i give a review for each chapter do you?) Honestly i like the way you handelled Ri Kouran. She has that Ri feel. If Kouran tolled me that it was gaurnted not to blow up, and it was something as big as the Shogei Maru i don't know if i would even feel comfetable being on the same island as it. Good work. now i'll go onto the next chapter.
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