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| LackofColorHere 2008-05-31 ch 3,  | abusethanks for using this scene! I saw his reaction the first time I saw the movie, and I wanted someone to use it in a fanfic. thankyouthankyouthankyou moremoremoremoremoremore |
| Prieda Solo 2008-02-04 ch 3, | abusegood story, but you do have a bit of slang creeping in. Using u instead of you. It makes it seem less...polished. But otherwise great story, nice work! |
| Prieda Solo 2008-02-04 ch 1, | abusenice beginning and good characters so far. Would be better if you started a new line each time someone different speaks, just makes it easier to read :) Otherwise great stuff, moving on to next chapter... |
| Daughter.Shadow 2007-12-02 ch 3, | abuseBrilliant! Keep writing, Captain! |
| Frizz the Eccentric 2007-08-31 ch 3, | abuseThis is sweet, but you really need to have it checked over. Twards the beginning of this chapter you used "u" instead of "you". |
| Kelly Tolkien 2006-07-26 ch 2, | abuseThis is good, fightening but good |
| Nathaneal Jacobs 2006-07-23 ch 1, | abuseI just knew I'd find it! Some one had to do it! I love you're story, Cap'n. Sincerely, (signed)Nathaneal Jacobs |
| Ladye Black 2006-07-09 ch 1, | abuseAww! They're so cute together! This is very good...you said 'Chapter One Done', will there be more then? I really hope there is! Geoff and Wat need more love! |
| Banjarak 2006-06-11 ch 1, | abuseI love geoff. Update!! |
| lilsteves 2006-05-10 ch 1, | abuselol. Great story. I like the comments at the end. I can't wait for the next chapter! :D |
| AlinaJaqui 2006-04-25 ch 1, | abuseGreat story, yes someone is finally writing a Wat and Geoff story. Keep it up! One suggestion though, could you make a new paragraph every time someone else speaks, it's less confuseing then. Thanks! -Jaqui |
| weez2610 2006-04-06 ch 1, | abusegreat! write more! |
| 001ElvenWarrior 2006-04-06 ch 1, | abuseYup,the good old characters-Wat and Geoff duking it out :D I love that you had him use "fonging" again, that's definitely his trademark. Will Will get back and Roland? Will that bruised eye bring up any suspicion? Lol. I look forward to your next chapter :D 001ElvenWarrior |