"Besides, would anyone out there actually be stupid enough to care about a rough-edged, angry, yellow little mouse like her?"

YES! I totally love that line, because I mean...come on, who HASN'T thought that about themself? (Their self? I have no idea what that term thing would be. I apologize for any grammar rages you may experience.) But yeah. Great chapter!

Would Swifty be the Japanese boy she went too far with?

Is that it?

Do I get a cookie?

So, I haven't talked to you in a few days, but, you're updating, so I know you're still alive, and this pleases me.

Hope you're having a good week. Even though it's only Monday.

You're right-there isn't NEARLY enough femmeslash in this fandom! There needs to be more, and you're just the person to do it. Great start, do more soon, please!

I have to admit I haven't read many femmeslash fics (I'm pretty sure I haven't read any in the Newsies fandom) so I am very much anticipating this fic for that reason, as well as the reason that I know it's gong to be good.

Ahyay! I loved the Snittery part, Skittery's line about a home having love and Snitch telling him he already had a home. And of course you've got me all sucked in, now I couldn't stop reading if I wanted to, because I have to know what happens--i.e., What were Toby and Michiyo fighting about, how are Evelyn and Michiyo going to get together, etc. Soo...you could update soon, mmkay? SO GLAD you started a new fic!

ooh this seems so good!
carry da bannah,
Fe

Well of course you know I love it. I'm really excited for more. Just. YAY.

This is very different, but fatasitc for that reason. I really like it.

;) There are probably only three femmeslash stories in the Newsies fandom because we only have one truly useable female character in Newsies. Slash is just so much easier, what with hundreds of possible pairings. ;) haha!

And Snittery just in the background? Is this really my Lutells?

As always, I adore your writing, m'dear. Keep it coming.

Loves!
Mondie