What happened between chapter 6 and 7. This is a super abrupt change, first the two couples are heading to the dance and the next thing I know ships are heading home and everyone is injured. Was there an accident on the way to the dance that involved goddess-proof poison? Did you forget to upload a chapter or did something else happen. I would just like to know as it seems like sloppy work to be missing an entire section (and I am surprised that no other reader noticed it.) Otherwise I think this is a well written story.

cant wait to read part three these are wicked

HA!

BITCH!jk

IM AT THE HIGH SKOOL!

marios leaving it to go to another one in a month so he doersnt hav to wear uniform!

HA!

MAN...

THIS STORY SUCKED SO BADLY THAT IT MADE BALLS FALL OFF RUN OUT THE ON TO THE STREET AND START RUNNING INTO HILIEAHAND GOT RUNNED OVER BY AN 18-WHEELER THX ALOT DICK FACE CUZ IM SUING U FOR NEW BALLZ!1

SINCERLY WEC RM38 JON GEORGE AND PROJECT NIKE!

USE UR HEAD GENIUS!

I want to see what happens next! :)

As some or the faithful fans out there have noticed, I have taken down the third part of the trilogy because I just didn't like where it was going and I was getting Writer's block with it. So, Within the next 2 months there will be small 2 to 5 chapter mini-stories that are connected to the first 2 parst of the arc. For now that is easier for me to work with, since i Also have several Evangelion stories also going now. So please bare with me! dennisud

That...was painful...what the hell?

That was nice can you emaiol me when you get the new story arc started please. keep up the good work.

Hi All, I will continue this story line in the 3rd saga of the trilogy, in approximately 2 weeks. I have 3 other short fics that concern the tenchi characters in different situations & combinations. Plus another crossover quickie!, then I will promise to start the final saga of this storyline!

I promise, OK.

P.S.- I do need pre readers & a writer to Write the "Honeymoon" from my outline since I do not write lemons, or limes for that matter. So please e-mail me, only those who are interested, Please!

Oh, so that's it? What about that guy? Write more soon..please?

funaho would be mayuka's great great grandma

she's achika's grandma tenchi's great grandma and mayuka's great great grandma

W..W..What? You better finish this! I wanna see what happens to Nobuyuki and Kat!

This is a pretty good sequel to your first story. Keep it up!

Hey, this is pretty dang good!

Bravo,Bravo!Tee hee,Make it a K/T(Kat/Trunks)!Okay,Okay,Do whatever ya want,Ja!