You really draw in your readers.

Ello'

I got here from storms page, I love her work and she seems to reallllly like yours ,,, so I thought give Zillah a try!

Nice creative posture as well as plot layering.

look forward to more of your work, nice to meet you Z

J

well hmmm how to put it. I liked the story very much. but I have to say the school kinda detracted from it. Just can't seem to wrap my mind about a predator forcing someone to a human school. and the ending. well I was hoping he would take her along lol I would love to see you use their home world. that is enough of my flame and well other than those two things I loved the story. well done. )

Oh, dude, that was Friggin' awesome! I can't wait for the squeal!

how soon till you start to make the sequel to this story?

YES one from aliens, and one from predator 2

I congratulate you. I have read this story from front to finish and I must say, you have a gift for it. I enjoyed this story, I hopefully, I will continue reading more. Good luck.

I can has happy.

Pred killed bad peoples, saved an innocent...

He's like Venom without the freaky double plurals!

XD

Iloved this and i hope you write more

A good story overall. However, at the first chapter were it says “years after Earth destrution”, is it refering to the Auriga incident, because if it is, then weyland-Yutani wouldn’t exsits anymore. Just a thought. Still a good read.

I have a random question: is he the son of the woman that survived the end of AVP?

Judging from the title of this chapter, your have good taste in movies...

KeyesHalo, no idea where Borgia comes from.

I will bet money that Kura'tha means Scarface!

Holy! That was just incredable! One of the best stories i have ever read! I better get going reading that sequel!