Gorgeous story. I wish I could think of a stronger word but I can't seem to at the moment. Simply gorgeous!

Gorgeous... really gorgeous. I'm extremely fond of the song into the bargain, so that just makes this piece even better. Very sensitive and in touch with Vincent's character - well done!

wild-filly

Hah not going to bed yet w00t thank the gods for Mountain Dew. good job, I really do like those lyrics and they seemed to represent it really well. Oh and thank you for the email it touched me, in inappropriate places, *hehe* just kidding with ya. Right now I'm off to run a couple miles.

wow the lyrics do seem a smiliar to vincent and lucrecia. ^.^ It's powerful...your fanfic O.o at least to me.

Love always,

Angel Wing Rinoa7 aka Ash

This is beautifully written. Really wonderful. It was touching, realistic and kept him in character. I wish more fanfics took themselves so seriously. One thing, though, I didn't understand what he decided in the end. I'm sorry- maybe I just missed it? All in all, a masterpiece. Thank you for writing it.