ClassicalConundrum 2008-11-30 . chapter 26Amazing.
AMAZING!
WOW! Why don't you have at least five thousand reviews by now? An original storyline that's exciting, original, sad, tense and funny all at the same time! I pay homage to you excellent writer!
CC |
firequaker 2008-11-15 . chapter 26I loved this. It held me in uldn't put it down. |
b-nothing 2008-11-12 . chapter 26this story is probably the most brilliant story i have ever read. congratulations and good luck with future endeavors
xx, b |
gangsta.lOver 2008-10-24 . chapter 26YAYAYAYAYYAYAYAY~
THIS PRIDE IS AWESOME !
that final battle. wow. all those strategies. wow. and to think they`re only 6th years here. wow. that. is. bloody. AWESOME !!
THANK YOU SO MCUH FOH THIS STORY!
so sad to see it end D=
but. (Y)(Y)(Y)(Y) was TOO GOOD !
thank yoU! you were a great writer, with a great plot, and fabulous ending. the Order and Wizengamot (sp?) mustve been so embarrassed xD haha
THANK YOU !! =D |
Tinuviel Simbelmyne 2008-09-21 . chapter 26I SO loved your story, that I've just read it all in one through!
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I really did!
I congratulate you
Eugenia |
Cwejr 2008-07-30 . chapter 26Excellent story.
Hard to pause to leave a comment.
Wish there was more, but I guess I'll have to look for another of your stories.
Enjoyed it very much. |
TheUltimateChefofDestruction 2008-07-29 . chapter 26OMG I loved this story. It was the first Harry/Draco story that I have ever read and now my standards are going to impossibly high if I choose to read and more from other authors. XD |
Cwejr 2008-07-29 . chapter 13Seeing how old this is, I believe a critique would be counterproductive, at best. However, I am glad to see someone mentioned to/too/two. Other homonyms also give you problems, but after two years and the to/too/two problem has not been corrected, pointing them out would be a waste. Therefore:
I really enjoy this story. Looks like I've got another favorite author to add to my list. I have always been able to read right by any ** or smut or slash and only see it on the third or fourth reading, unless it is pointed out. Therefore I selectively read the author's notes and comments. That way I can read the story without distractions.
I hope you keep writing, you're good. even with the bad parts. |
Kokou 2008-06-22 . chapter 26I. Loved. This. Fic! It is 10 a.m now, and I started reading around 2:30 a.m. In other words, I was so absorbed that I stayed up all night reading it! I love the characterization of everyone. And the Lion's Pride? How I wish JKR had done something like that with the DA. I loved it loved it LOVED IT! But now I'm sad it's over... |
miadragonlover 2008-03-07 . chapter 26I loved this story! I really enjoyed it! Is there something after this? Or does it stand alone? I really enjoyed reading it! Keep up the excellent writing!
~rah~ |
emuroo 2008-02-21 . chapter 24I was re-reading this, and just had to comment on this chapter.
"Nodding his head in agreement, Harry turned his head and sighted down his wand. Eyes locked on Voldemort as the Dark Lord sneered in anger. “You and what army Potter!” He roared, his Death Eaters laughing in amusement.
“That would be us.”"
A serious contender for the best line ever contest! Every time I read it I sort of go Wo! (quietly) |
DerangedxandxSarcastic 2008-02-07 . chapter 26that was such a fitting ending to the story.
one last time, I love it and you for writing it, thank you so much!
fantastic job! |
DerangedxandxSarcastic 2008-02-07 . chapter 25beautiful and so well done, I loved the chapter |
DerangedxandxSarcastic 2008-02-07 . chapter 24oh my god! fabulous job! it's getting really hard to type cause I'm restraining myself from jumping around in joy, my brother is laughing at me cause I keep squealing! I loved this chapter! it was so well done! |
DerangedxandxSarcastic 2008-02-07 . chapter 23oh my god I love you I love you I love you! that was so great, Voldemort weirds me out a tad, but that is to be expected is it not?
great chapter though! |