That was amazing. Perfect for Basta and his disturbing mind... you should write another but in Capricorns POV

lolz i luvd it!!
-keep on rockn!

That song scares me.

It was a really good song/poem, though kinda disturbing, espessially the "raping your wife" part. That was just kinda freaky. I liked the beat though, and I liked the "master said" to the end, espessially

say wha?

yowza your right its kinda disturbing um wow i think i'll go read a different one of your stories...

That's SO bad!

i liked it i wish you had've elaborated more though

Um... wow that was different. Good but different. But I don't really get that tongue thing. Good job!

XD
Very nice

ok then... too many cleaning product fumes...

hmm, basta would make a good rapist.

ya, no comment, have fun, er, cleaning the bathrooms?

it almost sounds like it should be a song in one of those emo/i hate the world/let's go die bands

*backs away slowly and then runs* well...you did warn people... however, my friends can me more disturbing at times so ill give you a cookie and a B+

er i'll give you a E for effort?

*-gives you an odd look* You are never a loud to clean your bathroom again! and when I was typing clean I almost put kill because of that.
Oh but it was interesting which is good, I like diffrent!

Love&Peace
~YGA~

it was good dark but good