AH! THAT WAS AMAZING~ I loved it~ It did make me laugh that as you went your chapters got shorter . . . and shorter . . . and shorter. XD I loved the drama, some nice comedy in there also. I would like to tell you that this story helped me relax. In about three hours or so I have to get up and go to my first art show, and I was spooked by a thriller therefor getting NO sleep, so I read your story~ It's calmed me down. (Hopefully I can Sleep for the remaining three hours now!)

This Story scared me about half to death though! Gosh! Killing Kenshin-Sama and Sojiro-Sama off like that, I otta . . .=_=;;. But at least you had the love conquered rule in there.I love it when love conquers things~

Anywho! Bravo! Wonderful job! Kudos, dido, and so on so on. ;p Keep on writing! Your story made me sob, laugh, and smile.
5 stars, 'kiddo'.~ ;p

Okay, not confused anymore. Obviously just forgot yourself for a while there or something. Great story anyway. I really enjoyed it.

Love Randa*

Okay, now I'm really confused. Did Kenshin and Soujiro somehow get switched back into their bodies and I missed it? I'm assuming the Kenshin in this chapter was still in Soujiro's body but that doesn't explain the violet eyes or the scar on his cheek. I don't know. Can you enlighten me? I'll probably find out next chapter anyway but if I'm still confused then I'll let you know.

Love Randa*

P.S. I'm still enjoying this by the way.

Cool, this is quite amusing so far. Just a little typo I picked up. In the third last sentence, Kaoru calls Kenshin by his name even though he's in Soujiro's body. Wouldn't Isuzu get confused all over or was Kaoru actually talking to Soujiro in Kenshin's body. I'm confused. Anyway, just thought I'd let you know. Everything else has been awesome so far. Onto the next chappie!

Love Randa*

Nice. ^_^

Wow... that was friggin awesome! I like this fic a lot! Oh... this one is also known as Shadow of the Shinsengumi on Heart of the Sword.

^-^ aw.
i liked the end of chapter 18, how soji-chan just smiled and then punched shishio in the face. i had to keep myself from laughing! the ending was a little fast, though, but i liked how it turned out. i guess i was just waiting so long for the end, i didn't enjoy it as much as i thought. but i kept with it all the way!
i hope you write more fantastic fics, you're a really good writer and i'd like to see you do more.
ketcha l8r

vampiresakura14

ps
have you read any of my fics yet? i only have two right now, but the more reviews the better, i think. (they're both YGO fanfics and both are about seto, an' that's all i'm sayin'^-^)
sayonara

Ew...Kaoru pashed Sou-chan! Whahahahaha! +_+ =3 I'll bet Ken-chan wasnt too happy bout that! *gringrin* Great end to a great story!

Nice ending!!

Pretty good. I did enjoy it. Do continue writing.

LOL! Kaoru kissed Soujiro! LOL!

Anyway, great story. In the end, they found out how to break the curse. It's such a sweet ending.

I loved this story, but i feel it could have done with anoher chapter just to round the end off, other than that, it was great.
I await your next story, get writing!

Not bad. Could be better - when can it not?

But not bad. EW. Kaoru kissed Soujirou.
The only objection I have is that the ending is a all happy happy everyone lived happily ever after kind. Yeah, those are nice ... but I like the ones with bad endings better. Sad endings make me happy. Happy endings make me sad.
It's strange ... yes?

Putting aside my taste for stories, it was good. The reason the curse was displaced was reasonable, but oh so cliched. (sorry) But it was fitting. And I suppose if your last chapter wasn't 100% great, the other chapters made up for it. Not all great stories have to go out with a blast!

This story is one of the better (or best) ones that I've seen on this site. If you don't like my criticism, don't heed it. I criticize everyone. It's a sad fact of life.

However, you've already done great. And I don't think I've criticized too much ...
Anyways, good story, man (or girl, or whatever). Even if the ending made me sad, the other eighteen chapters made me happy. So good for you! And for me!

Good luck on your other stories.

the next chapter had better be a good one, or i'm coming over there and slapping you with a wet fish! Sojiro had better not die in bed thats all i'm saying.

update (please)! :)

WHY?
YOU HAD BETTER TURN THIS AROUND! I LOVE SOJIRO AND KENSHIN TOO MUCH FOR THEM TO DIE LIKE THAT! THEY-MUST-LIVE!


...curse you.
you better keep going.
cu next chap.
vampiresakura14