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LuckyDuck29
2009-09-01 . chapter 8
Sorry I haven't reviewed earlier; I've been really busy.

This was a very thought provoking and informative chapter. I almost felt like I was there with Ludwig and Matilda; very well written.

I hope your personal issues are being resolved and that everything turns out OK.
The Illustrious Crackpot
2009-09-01 . chapter 8
This chapter was truly excellently done; all of the subtle and specific details concerning the historical period, and the way all dialogue upon the historical subjects were treated, really gave this the air of an authentic period piece and clearly showcased the thoroughness with which you researched it. The simultaneous harshness and sensitivity that this incredibly delicate matter was dealt with also added a huge impact. Phenomenal work all around.
Em O'Gilt
2009-06-17 . chapter 8
I love it. It's amazing as usual! I can't wait to see what happens next. xD
calisotalatina
2009-05-29 . chapter 8
i love this chapter, and you made it so..real...the historical detail,ya even make hitler a wolf! i love that :)
btw i cant wait to see quackmore figthing nazis ;)
Commander
2009-05-29 . chapter 8
Great chapter! I didn't find anything at all offensive in it--except for Hitler's existence in the world, but that's not your doing. ;) I'm curious as to what trials will await them in Scotland. I assume they're heading to Dismal Downs, right? It'll be fun to see Ludwig try to fit in there. :)

The ending didn't feel rushed at all. And even if it had, the chapter still holds together very well and I'm so happy for an update that I wouldn't have noticed anyway. I hope you'll be able to get the next chapter up soon, but I realize that that might be difficult, so I'll just wish you best of luck with life and everything. Stay strong! :)
tanith-4486
2009-05-28 . chapter 8
excellent chapter.
GreenLeoFiend
2009-05-28 . chapter 8
Another great powerful chapter! Looking forward to more but I can wait! The muse complies when the muse complies, and I know from experience that the muse and real life duties don't get along well. So don't worry hon, I will still be here for chapter 9 no matter how much time the muse takes to deliver. Great job.
loonytunecrazy
2008-12-08 . chapter 7
Awsome chapter Ludwig and Maltilda so suited each other like the scenes between and Maltilda's family. Really like the wedding scenes and the scenes at the Hotal. I wasn't when AH was going to make an apperance I'm big History Buff so I will find it intresting to see what the professtor does. You doing a fanstaic job keep up the good work.
loonytunecrazy
2008-12-01 . chapter 6
Aw this is an adoreable chapter here loved the the blossming relationship between Ludwig and Matilda and I liked the glimse of Donald as a child.
kkkristinaaa
2008-10-29 . chapter 7
I really love this story, it is so sweet without being overly so, you have really captured the spirit of the comic book. The words written make the story, and incredible experience to read. Thank you for the update and I am eagerly awaiting the next installment.
The Illustrious Crackpot
2008-10-15 . chapter 7
Quite the daring, Don Rosa-esque enterprise...well, yes, in implying PG-13 occurences in a Disney work (his story "The Prisoner Of White Agony Creek" still raises my eyebrows at times), but more obviously in the fact that there's going to be some integration of "real-life" historical/political events. That alone has me excited to see the next chapter, never mind this continually awesome, sensitive writing.
LordNegaduck
2008-10-04 . chapter 7
Wow!! That chapter was so very good and extremely well written!! I really felt the emotion and drama that both Ludwig and Matilda went through...I mean for Ludwig, he just can't pick up and leave Vienna because of his work, and it's not easy for Matilda just to pack up and leave her family. There are lots of real life issues in this story that is becoming more and more common in today's world especially with internet dating and all. Thank God Matilida had her family support and Hortense knew that if Matilda didn't go with Ludwig, she would forever live to regret it.

I definitely can't wait to read on! Nice job as always Mouselady!!
LuckyDuck29
2008-09-28 . chapter 7
What a sweet chapter; romance, conflict, kissing and making up, a wedding and a honeymoon, even scenes after the honeymoon, and you left on a great cliffhanger.

Lol, I can see now where Donald got his temper; Hortence and Quackmore reminded me of him and Daisy.
GreenLeoFiend
2008-09-27 . chapter 7
LOL, absolutely cute hon! You updated! And great chapter. The engagement, wedding and honeymoon in one chapter. Loved all the cold feet discussions. Great job.
bethhigdon
2008-09-26 . chapter 7
this chapter just made my day. thank you. and I agree romance is best done tastefuly. *especialy romance with Disney cartoon characters* and you handeled everything both tastefuly and beautifuly. (as always) ;)

as for WWII playing a part in your story. to be honest I was expecting it since chapter 5. It just fits when you take into acounnt the time and place of the story. speaking of time how soon is the the serphent going to atack. because if the cartoons are canon. Donald will have to be old enough to fight in the south seas durning WWII. cheack out Commando Duck on youtube and other WWII films that Disney made.
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