So well done, an interesting plot.

aw - i loved it because it was beautifully writen

but omg it was so sad

seriously, i mean if brucas don't end up together then everyone's gonna be screwed like this

it was too sad, i can't take it

but then at the same time i love angsty oneshots and stories, it makes the love that much more beautiful!

That was amazing. It was really good. So well written, I'm just at a loss for words.
-Annie.

i never read lp stories but someone recommended this one so i thot i'd check it out. it was really good. u can just imagine the quicksand that they are all in. no-ne's gonna come out of this happy! great piece of work! congrats!

so i was a little aprehensive abotu reading this since it was leyton but with the way Baby Stay Away was, i fiured it was a safe bet lol. and.. ugh.. i knew she wasn't gonna leave him. i mean i wasnt sure if they were married yet but she just wasnt gonna leave because then she would've left lucas too. i absolutely loved it. so simple yet so full of emotion. Wonderful!

Oh, it's so good. I feel sorry for peyton, i do, and that is in spite the fact im a total sucker for brucas:P I was like, 'go after her, c'mon' while i was reading:P too bad he didn't actually. Neither Luca or peyton could be happy in marriage like that. I loved very much, so again, nice work;)
chebelle x

okay...wow. I was so apprehensive about reading this fic...obviously b/c well...when the words Peyton, Lucas, and 'and' are in the same sentence i tend to just scroll down the screen...away from the title. But, you being the most amazing and devoted Brucaser that you are, i took a chance, i read it...and i LOVED it..in a very harsh...wierd...sort of way. Amazingly enough, i felt for PEyton. I mean...really...poor girl. I can't even begin to imagine how crazy she must be feeling right now. :( You should right a trilogy. YEah...this time, have Peyton go find brooke, Bring her back, let her and Lcuas get together, divorce Lucas, find Jake, then get back wiht him and everyone will be happy! :D Its a lot to do...but happiness doesn't come cheap. lol
excellent job!

OMG!!
I FEEL SO SORRY FOR PEYTON.
WOW!! NEVER THOUGHT IT COULD HAPPEN.
AMAZING

omg that was so depressing! lol but I freaking LOVED it! man! now you gotta write another one parter... and have brooke come back and save everyone! Man! Peyton is so dumb! I'm sorry man poor lucas boo freaking hoo! Why should she subject herself to years of misery when it is SO obvious he doesnt love her? Alone or not you can be FRIENDS. Gah! Some women... lol ;) love ya!

This was a really sad story. And I definitely think you should start writing more LB stories. Anyways, good job!

Okay. So when was the last time you wrote BL? Keeding.

No really, write BL. Now. Not NB, not LP (even Lucas still loving Brooke LP).

I'm in love with the toothbrush analogy. I have no idea why, but I can totally see their toothbrushes repelling each other and his and Brooke's brushes getting all snuggly together.

Anways ... this was heartbreaking. You totally captured Peyton's feelings of loneliness and entrapment, and her reasons for staying with a man who loves someone else. When she hopes Brooke will save them all and she doesn't ... my heart actually broke a little. So write some BL to mend it, kay?

When are you going to start writing BL fics again? This has to be the fifth LP fic you wrote in a row! Please start writng BL fics again?

OMG! That was awesome! I liked everything in this short! I should read your other story, which I haven't read yet, the sequel after this. Poor Lucas and poor Peyton. I felt so bad for both of them. They actually got married. I understand. Peyton just did what she thought was right. She is so insecure. And I felt bad for Lucas as well. He is marrying someone that he is not in love with. That's just sad. But I loved the sadness of it all. Great job!