Oh my gosh, this is brilliant. The use of 'skeleton grin' and Jack's voice and Timothy's problems -- hee, this fic is so much love. It would be awesome if you continued with this idea. XD Please write more soon!

~firedraygon97

Yeah, this is cute.

That was adorable! :) Great ending, too. I loved it.

Love it! Humorous ending. I love how you portray the views of Halloween Town and its residents so well.
~Black Thorned Rose

LOL, very clever! Love the twist at the end.

Ha that was cool , i didnt see that coming !

Really well done, funny and well written all the way through, building to a wonderfully amusing twist end! What fun!

this is cute

I don't think you actually got the original idea across. Your summery suggested he was going to put on bright happy colors and scare his parents out of their minds. Otherwise you had a great opening. The first paragraph was perfect. You did a great job showing us the character background.

hm... u should give a little more background on the Skellington children...