Hm. I thought it would've had a bad ending or something...but it was a nice change of pace nonetheless!

A video of Axl? Can't wait! (evil grin)

Great fic, man! I totally worship Chipp Zanuff, and when I saw this, I had to read it. Is it okay if I use some of the ideas (Like a person named Luke and childhood tapes) in a ChippxO.C. fic I'm doing? If you don't want me to, then it's alright. PM me and respond, please.

Once again, AWESOME!! Do Axl soon, mmkay?

That was insanely cute xD What to say... I liked how you did the transition from the video and back (very simple; I like simple), and how you incorporated Luke into the ending. Since I just recently got into the Guilty Gear fandom (shame on me, I know), I don't know if you got the personalities right. Axl's on the nail, and Baiken was ok (if a bit talkative). Anji seemed all right as well. The only one I was a tad confused about was Chipp. He seemed a bit too... cheerful. But I know NOTHING about him, so don't let it get to you. I just thought his personality conflicted with his character design. But eh; I'm probably wrong.

Something I DID notice, however, was that in the first part (when they were looking for the tape), I think you made an error. When Anji mentions that Chipp was born in America, Baiken goes on about saying how Chipp was an orphan. But, instead of saying Mito (or Anji, whatever), she says "Low". Since Anji, not Axl, was the one who mentioned it, I'm thinking it was an error. Just to, y'know, let you know.

And WOW is this a long review. Sorry for rambling, and I can't wait to read the Axl one. He's my favorite ^_^

Cool fic. I thought it was pretty good. I liked when Baiken made fun of Chipp for falling in a well. ^^