this made my day. end off story :P would love to read another chapter off this ^^ you have a very nice flow and i couldnt stop laughing when i read it. keep it up! ^^

funny! :D

...Dude, that was funny. Seriously, this is comedy at its best.

Ha! Fun! hahahaha death by deer

Hahaha, very funny. I love it!

very good! whana reade more about it..so please hurry up.. =)

This was really funny pet,
well done I especially liked they way they were killed,

Lili

OMG lol that was so funny.. when I was reading this I was laughing so hard my roomate asked it I was crazy! this was so good please write another chapter cuz as William said "This is going to be interesting." LOL