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syNemYoA
2007-11-16 . chapter 5
that was cute! ;)

very kawaii,.,. :D

hehehehe
syNemYoA
2007-11-16 . chapter 1
kyaa! ;)

cute chapter,.,. :D

i love this couple so much! ;D
Alaena Night
2006-10-16 . chapter 1
Good work with this! The only time I wrote a 100 word story was on another site. It had to be exactly 100 words, and could not have even a single word like "the" "a" or "an" repeated. It sort of scared me from writing any more 100 word stories. But this was written excellently. And the last line is so cute!

—Alaena
AnimeGirl622
2006-04-02 . chapter 6
We! YES! You updated ! I gotta run so i'll review this and get to the other chapters of your I just read later! LOVIN' THE ISHIHIME!
AnimeGirl622
2006-03-26 . chapter 2
YAY! FOREVER AND EVER LIVE ISHIHIME! This is so adorable, i'm loving it so far! Please update :D
violetctm
2006-03-24 . chapter 2
very nice! i enjoyed it very much. update please!
jo-chan
2006-03-21 . chapter 1
Cute! I loved the quote you set a the ending!
Sailor Tiamat
2006-03-21 . chapter 1
Very sweet. Its really cool how you fit that into 100 words.
Razgriz89
2006-03-21 . chapter 1
Never limit yourself to 100 words. Read the site's motto and analyze what you must improve.

If you have upcoming chapters, make them better. There's always an improvement room in every story.
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