Sort of weird when he was already attracted to her at a young age.. But a few more years and it wouldn't matter anyway.. XD

at lease he didn't do creepy stuff like break into her room and stare at her while she was asleep...

he didn't do/say anything until she was of age and she initiated the kiss.

this was sweet.

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Beautiful! So sweet! Excelent work! Keep writing!

Very cute one-shot. Well written! :)

Aww!

:] It was really nice. There were moments in the beginning where I thought despite Kenshin's denial of being a stalker was doubtful, I enjoyed how you ended this story, simple and clean.

For such a great story, your ego is definitely excuseable. That was so nice! You fit so much into a oneshot, that's awesome!

aw, sorry this is review is like 2 years late. but i just had to say that i thought this story was very sweet, and i love how it was actually kaoru reading kenshin's diary, and then later on it goes on to the present time. good job here! :)

It was really sweet and cute! Ah, a jealous Kenshin! how cute!

Aw, lots of warm, fuzzy feelings! :-)

It was well writen... but I guess if you made him a few years younger he wouldn't have seemed like a pedophile...

Hehe love this story!

That was kaiwaii! Loved it! and i'm up way too late to be reading this kind of stuff...screws with my head...gr ANyway, LOVED IT! SO CUTE!

Of course it was sweet, just a cute little KK fluffiness! Very nicely done.

That is such a sweet story! One of the best I've ever read. :)