Interesting idea. needs updates though. very good idea.plot is okay but at least it's semi-existant. 9/10. good enough to get added to story alerts.

Well, this is different. Good, though. He is a right prick, isn't he? I would like to see more.

Ah, an update! It's great to see another chapter to this fanfic, since it's one of the most well written of the bunch that I keep on my Alert list. My only hope is that you don't take as long to update the next chapter. ):

I especially love the mentioning of Lester's cowardice in here. It's just so... Gah, I can't describe it. 1st person point of view, I realized in this chapter more than any of the others, is perfect for this fanfic.

His lonely thoughts in the night really add to the gloomy mood, and I'm really starting to wish he'd died that day instead of having to sit around in this alien world all scared and confused and stuff! xD

"War changes people...and if kindness is what is needed to remind our boys they're still human, then I am all for it." This has to be my favorite line. There were plenty that I liked, obviously, but this just spoke to me a little louder...

Good to see an update, in any case! Sorry for my scatterbrained 'review'. x3

Hi, you don't know me, but I think I've seen you around fanficrants, somehow managed to add your username to my author alert, and then forgot about it. But I'm glad I did, because this is amazing. It's so original, and clever. The writing style is perfect - you really did what you set out to achieve. And I can't wait for the next chapter.

Great! Update! Is good story! Who's Kilroy?! Why does the spellchecker want to change that to Railroad, Railroads, or Uniroyal?! Why am I shouting?! Update!

This is simply an amazing story, PPG. Definately surpasses mine by a long shot! I really hate not having anything to critisize in a review, but for this, I'll have to make an exception. Excellent job.

I wanted to say that If I sounded annoyed or anything earlier, it wa snot my intent. This have been going crazy within my life latelyand it's been getting to me. Not to mention I was only half awake at the time. I'm sorry If I snapped at you in my E-Mail. I really do need to get better at writting, though, but hopefully by getting reveiws and such I can get better! :) On another note, I've never read a fanfiction lik ethis and I've been READING them for about a year now. Good work! :)

Oh, I like this. Tis infinitely better than 'modern poke-geek goes to pokemon world fic' or 'old english knight/princess goes to pokeworld.' Good work! Ha! Martians! *laugh* *huggles* Good luck on continuing it!

This-is ... this is great ... this-is ... this is GREAT! I've never read a universe teleportation story so original! Uppin' for Part Two!

A very nice, solid start.

Wow, you are right, this was a wonderful detour from the cliche of person that knows what Pokemon is and then transported to Pokemon World.

I also liked on the time change as well, and to be honest it felt a little like the Mark Twain book, a Conedicate Yankee in King Author's Court, so their you have your feel of the story all right, I also didn't see any modern words in this. I must say I look forward to the next chapters.

Very creepy in an old sci-fi way, partially because of how the writing style is, and the thoughts and reactions of the characters. Very good work, keep it up.