HOLY CRAP.
Amazing is not the word to describe this. Try stunning, beautiful, intense, and holy ** this was amazing!
*faves*

It's ** up, beautiful and i loved it. Even if it did get a little confusing...

I'm speechless. It's perfection in so many ways.

Wow that was realli good lollz

*fangirl squeal*

I loved it! I love the way both of them acted, and I could SEE it. It's hard to find good Cloud pairings, and this is definitely one of my favorites, and you made it so sexy I could just die. Good job!

Best ** Cloud/Leon one-shot I've ever read.

Ah...! That was so satisfying... the writing totally moves you along with it. I'm happy to find an NC-17 that isn't just pure, poorly written smut. This is absolutely beautiful, and you captured their anger and the effects of alcohol perfectly. Wow... I love it, love it, love it. Fantastic job. It put me in an entirely different state of reality.

I'm at a lost for words.

Amazingly written; left me speechless.
Great pairing; made me giggle.
Pure, hot, nonstop smut; oh dear god.

Write more like this... Please? -beg-

It was different. i can honestly say that i have never read anything writen like this good job..your like a pioneer.

...Wow. That's intense. Very nice. Not sure what to write, but I felt I had to give this some sort of review. This goes on my favorites list.

Wow...That's intense. Have to say I'm really glad there's people to write about this pairing a bit more~! I like your writing.

M, pure hot smut. That was realy good. You should write more of these. Lots more.

mm .. nothing like pure smut ... >.> with a little character development of course :)

Oh **! That was ** hot! I loved it!

...Interesting. I can't say I'm a fan of this pairing, but I don't exactly hate it either. Very slight Cloud/Aerith, which I actually don't support either, but what the heck. You wrote it, I read it, and it was actually well written, even if I still don't like the pairings.