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| jusenkyo ruler 2008-03-20 ch 1,  | abusetwitch twitch |
| Denise 2008-03-01 ch 1, anon. | abusewhy is it rated M?... did i miss something?... |
| Gundum M 2008-02-20 ch 1, | abuseit was an all right written fic, and i found it to be verry funny |
| Califaction 2008-01-04 ch 1, | abuseHilarious! You do a good job of describing what might happen should anyone have the guts to call Ed what he always thinks they do. I especially love the Evil Aura, and Armstrong and Havoc's reactions. Heehee! Thanks for writing and posting! |
| Katie 2007-10-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh...my...! Bwahahahahahahaha! This was just way to funny. Hehehehehe! I loved the way you ordered the scenes. Muahahahaha! The way you decsribed what happened to the new recrutes without actully describing anything was really well done too. Please excuse me while I continue my uncontrolable laughter. Wahahahahahahahahhaha! |
| Lauren 2007-09-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseI stumbled across this and, on a whim, diecided to click on it. Boy, am I ever sure I did!! You really got me at the "...And he has excellent hearing" part. My sister had to come into the room to see if I was dying. ("She's choking on her potato chip! Should I do the Heimlick?") YES! I love it! |
| dogbertcarroll 2007-04-14 ch 1, | abuseLOL! |
| ZaKai 2006-10-28 ch 1, | abuseBrilliant. Simply brilliant and funny as hell. - Z |
| Cerberus 2006-07-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! That was great! I don't even want to think about what he did to them after all that! Great Job! |
| swk3000 2006-06-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh. My. God. This is friggin hilarious!! I don't watch or read much of Full Metal Alchemist (stupid bookstore won't get anything in), but I do know that Ed doesn't like being called short. Heck, he beat up a train robber who called him short, and he was three-quarters asleep at the time! This story, however, is just too funny for words. Awesome work. |
| sadfru 2006-05-12 ch 1, | abuseI've seen a few episodes, fits the little midgeter to a tee! :) |
| Raishe 2006-05-11 ch 1, | abuseHAHAHA! I know how Ed feels! This is really funny. |
| Lamia angel of death 2006-04-23 ch 1, | abuseAnd that my friends is why you don't call Ed, a shrimp a tiny little midget a dwarf among dwarves pint-sized a mini-micro chibi shorter than short, and many other things. BTW, that was hilarious. keep out the good work. |
| igbogal 2006-03-25 ch 1, | abuseOh you lovely, lovely, person...you went and wrote some great FMA humor. I didn't think I could laugh at the end of a rather annoying day, but this made me chuckle, so thanks. I like that everyone is in-character here, especially the unbeleivably unflappable woman-of-steel, Hawkeye. Maybe I should have gone to school in Washington...then my professors might have taught me to write good prose like this. Love your style - write on! |
| Bobboky 2006-03-22 ch 1, | abusecool |