This is great. Maybe in the future it would be neat to see it from Naruto's stand point as well.

This was really cute, I enjoy reading introspective fanfics. It was an added bonus that it was NaruHina. I do hope you do more with this couple.

Nice introspect- I liked it. Great job on this, and congrats on bringing a tear to my eye with your wonderful words! ^--^

I love it! You portray Hinata so well... @@; I can relate to her even more with this...

that was sad and sweet and just all around precious! I usually don't bother with NaruHina, but this I thought was very well written (after all, it is YOU ^_~) and stayed in character and was just CUTE.

How cute!

nice...Naruto is ever so clueless...
I like your Hinata...and the comparisons between them. I like how her father's words fall right into place in her inner monologue.
One or two things I noted..the sentence "At first it’s not even a thought, is utter nonsense." should be 'it is utter nonsense' I think... There's a typo in the sentence "It’d be easier to be strong if hewas there to encourage her." -the "hewas"

Hi! This is new...a short fic on Hinata and Naruto. What a change from you regular Sakura and Gaara. How refreshing. got any more?

Very nice.

That was sweet

Kawaii. Utterly kawaii.

Aw!! I don't support this couple, but very cute. ^.^

Aw! I think this is precisely why Hinata likes him so much. I've seen many people try to do this, but you've really summed it up perfectly. This is a wonderful and satisfying little fic.

Wow. Just . . . wow.

This story is so wonderful, even being as short as it is. I'm a big fan of NaruHina, so it's nice to read how Hinata feels about Naruto from her own point of view.

Please continue writing such great stories like this one.