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| hzleys87 2007-04-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis was really cute, I enjoy reading introspective fanfics. It was an added bonus that it was NaruHina. I do hope you do more with this couple. |
| Wolf-of-Words 2006-06-20 ch 1,  | abuseNice introspect- I liked it. Great job on this, and congrats on bringing a tear to my eye with your wonderful words! ^--^ |
| Midori Ryuu 2006-03-23 ch 1, | abuseI love it! You portray Hinata so well... @@; I can relate to her even more with this... |
| Ninja Shen 2006-03-22 ch 1, | abusethat was sad and sweet and just all around precious! I usually don't bother with NaruHina, but this I thought was very well written (after all, it is YOU ^_~) and stayed in character and was just CUTE. |
| Mistress DragonFlame 2006-03-21 ch 1, | abuseHow cute! |
| Katterree Fengari 2006-03-21 ch 1, | abusenice...Naruto is ever so clueless... I like your Hinata...and the comparisons between them. I like how her father's words fall right into place in her inner monologue. One or two things I noted..the sentence "At first it’s not even a thought, is utter nonsense." should be 'it is utter nonsense' I think... There's a typo in the sentence "It’d be easier to be strong if hewas there to encourage her." -the "hewas" |
| encyser 2006-03-21 ch 1, | abuseHi! This is new...a short fic on Hinata and Naruto. What a change from you regular Sakura and Gaara. How refreshing. got any more? |
| Yeah this is deleted. 2006-03-21 ch 1, | abuseVery nice. |
| CrazyGirlofManyNames 2006-03-21 ch 1, | abuseThat was sweet |
| AngryPinkChibi 2006-03-21 ch 1, | abuseKawaii. Utterly kawaii. |
| ZombieFetish 2006-03-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseAw!! I don't support this couple, but very cute. ^.^ |
| The Prime Minister 2006-03-21 ch 1, | abuseAw! I think this is precisely why Hinata likes him so much. I've seen many people try to do this, but you've really summed it up perfectly. This is a wonderful and satisfying little fic. |
| Kaintely 2006-03-21 ch 1, | abuseWow. Just . . . wow. This story is so wonderful, even being as short as it is. I'm a big fan of NaruHina, so it's nice to read how Hinata feels about Naruto from her own point of view. Please continue writing such great stories like this one. |