the ending was sweet. nice work!

I began reviewing this story in the beginning and I really liked it, but then the whole character of the story changed when you put Lee and Kara together suddenly.

It's not that what ended up happening in the end was bad, the story just didn't feel quite right to me, which is why I stopped reading and reviewing. I've popped in every now and again to check on it but I still stand by my opinion.

I like the ending though, and the last few chapters, I just felt they weren't in character with the beginning of the story, which was more of a conspiratorial, practical joke thing.

Keep on writing though - you do the humour and flirtiness between Lee and Kara very well and that part of it has been enjoyable to read. :)

A happy ending! :) I do so enjoy a story with a happy ending. Thanks for sharing, I've enjoyed reading.

O Now I am looking forward to him coming back too!

*prays the internet doesnt act up again*

I heart the nuggets in your story so far. They make everything so much better!

Oh this should be good, cant wait to see the nugget look like and idiot. U ask if the guy is married or engaged but completely forget to ask if he's other wise attached is pretty damn stupid and a gauranteed way to make an ** out of yourself because you **/u/me/d. gotta love it

i would love to see those two wearing those hoodies...lol. nice job!

I really enjoyed this chapter. I am glad they seem to be working things out. I love the sweatshirts with the callsigns and messages
it is perfect for both of them. More soon please

I like the jokes on the hoodies. makes me laugh! i hope ali gets better soon :*(

Well good for Kara that Lee forgave her right away, but I haven't. That was a stupid joke gone on too long.

But thanks for righting the ship.

EGADS! I hope she knows what she is doing too!

Ok, sorry but I'm not sure I'm liking the way this story is going.

hehehehehe...

yes, as a matter of fact, i DO like it!

Bwahaha...you are as evil as Kara my dear, but what fun is that going to be, lol.

Thanks.
Marilyn

haha..that would be funny. more please!