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| ApolloShipper 2008-01-31 ch 5,  | abusecan you write an eploge and have it fluffy, that would make this story so much better :D but its awesome as it is.. I love it.. |
| Anastashia 2007-12-07 ch 2, | abuseYep, don't fight for it, just withdraw in anger. Works every time. |
| Anastashia 2007-12-07 ch 1, | abuseI'd say he's in a bit of pain there. |
| BSGaddict 2006-06-18 ch 5, | abuseI loved this story. It starts out major angst - though I loved that Lee finally confronted Kara on the way she messes him around -yes! But then you managed to get them round to a happy ending, which I didn't expect when I started. Also loved the bit where Kara says she's sorry and then just decides to go for it and blurt out how she's always loved him - very true to character I thought. |
| roofietoof 2006-06-02 ch 5, | abuseOh, wow. This was just...GAH. Really good. And see, I just told people that I didn't like to leave reviews that were just "good story". But sometimes that's all you have to say to express how you felt about it! Because it's true! I love me some angst, but the end was so sweet. Wonderful job, my dear. |
| annpo 2006-04-18 ch 3, | abuseO revenge. That was mean tho' I understand his pov. what next I wonder? |
| annpo 2006-04-18 ch 4, | abuseHe really is her slave isn't he? Lucky girl |
| annpo 2006-04-18 ch 5, | abuseFinished! Right before the best part?! That was great. Really enjoyed your story, the angst, the sorrow, the whole thing. Thanks |
| annpo 2006-04-18 ch 2, | abuseShe really is the bombshell queen isn't she? Good chapter. |
| annpo 2006-04-18 ch 1, | abuseYes!! Have to say, that felt good. I'm the biggest Lee/Kara shipper out, but the way she torments Lee deserves a comeback like this. I could've hit her myself after her performance in the bunkroom in Lay Down Your Burdens. |
| mangadreams 2006-04-18 ch 5, | abusereally enjoyed the story. you must write more stories |
| Tracyj23 2006-04-18 ch 5, | abuseThat was a nice ending. I'm glad they managed to say everything that needed to be said, and not hurt each other further. They are SO good at that. It almost seems like a sequel should be in the works - how they end up getting together... and be more than just friends. After all, they do love each other ... This has been an enjoyable story - right from angst to love. Great! Thanks for sharing. |
| gibgirl4 2006-04-18 ch 5, | abuseSuch a nice ending!! I enjoyed this! I'm sorry it's over! |
| Ash234 2006-04-18 ch 5, anon. | abuseI am sad that was the end. The last two chapters were good. Thanks for sharing. |
| cmf161 2006-04-06 ch 1, | abuseThis is fantastic! Just what I needed to help me get through the hiatus. And you've perfectly captured their anger-covers-hurt emotional frakked-upness. Very them! I can't wait for the next installment. Thanks for writing and providing fanfic crack to all of us who are equally obsessed! :) |