really good!


HawkAngel

That was such a lovely scene. I especially loved that last line.

"And for the first time in months, Fitzwilliam Darcy allowed himself to hope."

Such a beautiful line. Good job! Keep writing!

I LOVE IT! I like your version of the scene better than mine posted on fan fiction. You are a good writer. Well done, keep writing.

"I do not recall her exact words, but it was something to the effect that estrangement from your family would be nothing to her, for as your wife she would have pleasures enough to render those denied insignificant. Insolent girl!"




I LOVE that part. ABSOLUTELY GA-GA. Just like your Mr. Darcy. Brilliant!

you portrayed the characters very well. I loved it XD

Awesome! obviously his and Lady Catherine's idea's of disgrace are entirely different! Yea for Darcy!

Very nice! People love to fill in the scene between Mr. Darcy and Lady Catherine. This is one of the good ones!

Aw, that was georgeous! Pretty good attempt at Austen's language, too. Couple of suggestions about it though - the 'commenced' in the first line makes the sentance sound a bit stuffy; 'began' is more natural without being achconistic (I can't spell that!). Secondly, 'Aunt de Bough' is a bit formal, even for Darcy - surley he'd call her 'Aunt Catherine'?
That's me being very pinickity; obviously it's up to you and the fact I only found two words a little jarring shows how great the rest of it is!
If you ever came to rewrite this a bit (and as it's such a lovely piece, why not?) perhaps you could make Darcy *feel* a bit more desperate - words catching, sweaty palms, that sort of thing (except not so lazy! :-)
This is going on faves; an original, well-written P+P fic! It's taught me to hope, if you'll excuse for sayin so ;-)
-Jellyman

Aww, this fic left me with a watm happy feeling. Great job writing two characters that are notoriously hard to write!

~MJ

oh my gosh! this was really good!! good job!

Yes! Well written and in character... I've really enjoyed that scene, all the more so because I've often wondered what did pass between the two. Thanks for writing this!

aw! I love it!!

DeppGirl

I always wondered who gave Lady Catherine that report of them being engaged. It makes sense that it could have been Charlotte.

I like the idea and how you got Darcy to satisfy his aunt without lying to her. i was kind of hoping for a fight or battle of wills, but this story was good.

You did a good job of the language, though you did use a few phrases from the book. It was good, I'd just recommend avoiding using phrases from the book in the future.

Awesome. A great missing scene. Keep up the good work.

Beautiful. You made Darcy very successfully evasive, and very in character. I love how Jane Austen leaves these little holes in the books to the imagination, and you've done well with one of the holes to fill in the spaces inbetween. Wonderful job!