This is almost 100% narration. Learn to write.

good chapter so update soon and keep writing.

I love the humor in it. lol

Interesting writing style. I like it =]

Oh, and I never thought Pansy and Harry could get along that well...but I think I need to go find more Pansy/Harry stories now. Thanks =]

I'm amused and I enjoyed it. I've read stories like this before, though only rarely, and so far, the only ones I've read have been done by people with the skill to pull this style off. It works, and it's fun. Good job.


Later

that was freakin amazing. I just blew through all of the chapters and holy crap. that has to be one of the best Harry/Pansy's I've read. holy crap. -claps- You totally rock my world

I really liked how you ended it:)

Ok, see the thing is, I like the way yuou write... I just cant get past this chapter because of the lack of dialogue... its too... hevy... i dont make sense, do i?

I've really enjoyed the story and the quirky writing style :-)

Well, I loved it, I really, really loved it. It was scarily angry at times, but also happy, and I adored hearing about what other characters were doing with their lives. Very well done.
~Ani

Totally loved this. Completely awesome. Brilliant work. Thanks!

I really like your writing style :) pls say you're continuing with this story!

This was...different and very angry at times, and definitely not what I expected. But it was unexplainably wonderful anyway. Please write more. I'll be waiting for the update.
~Ani

I swear, you're my new favorite author. You are amazing.

We haven't met but can I say I love you? Or maybe just your writing style. I had such a fun time reading it. You're all over the place. Shake hands and pretend we're best mates?

I'm the stalker type. I will stalk the rest of your stories. Don't be offended.

Will finish up later. Til then...

prytania

God I love Harry/Pansy. Your style is awesome. Just the right number of tangents and out-there descriptions. I beg of you to continue.