Hehehe, I believed you missed one! Kudo's dad also learned how to teach him how to steer a boat.

But all in all, good story! :D :D :D :D

Lol well done. I know exactly how Shinichi feels. I'm sick with the flu right now. So I'm bed ridden so board... Reading fanfiction helps. This story was great. Well written. Loved the way you did it. Also I think it is time to tell Shinichi's hormones to cool it. They are going to get him killed one of these days. Every time Shinichi does something that is cool. My friend and I say "Where did he learn that?" The answer is always "Hawaii". Anyway good story really well done. See ya

Nice, a little OOC here and there but I suppose it comes with the age. Ahh, sweet sweet revenge and laughter is alway goood, wonderful. Shinichi, should try to outwit your dad more often, him outwitting you is not...interesting enough.

Very, very entertaining.

POWERPUFF GIRL! HHAHAHAAAA

that really got me.

Wow this was great

Hahaha the metal images i get from reading these...hahaha cant stop laughing.

I LOVED THIS! IT WAS HILARIOUS!

Too funny and I could actually picture all of this going on.

Good job man, good job!

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This story really made my day! I couldn't stop laughing... xD

And I just love this dairy style it fits Shinichi so well! 3

LOL. This is so funny! Awesome! Where'd you come up with the idea?

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Wah! This story doesn't deserve only 30 reviews! I love it. Your literary work has inspired me to read and write more! You rock more than Kelly Clarkson! Wahaha :D I really love it. Your way of writing is so unique and hilarious. Now I found out ways on how to write in my diary. haha. But anyway, I read your story more than once and didn't lost the least of interest :D I suggest you publish a book onee-chan. 256 stories! Amazing! Absolutely amazing! God gave you a talent you can share to the world. :D Hope you make more Shinichi and Ran Fanfiction! :*

Haha.. how come I never ran into this little oneshot all these years? LOL.. my, my.. what a fun read!

I laughed so much when I was reading this! It was great. Especially when Shinichi got distracted by certain things. Namely, Ran. The coma was great too.

Thanks for the one-shot! It was wonderful.

J. DCF

Hilarious XD. So like Shinichi. Haha!

Dude. You're. A freakin. Genius. That was HILARIOUS! please write more!