That was so amazingly well-written and true to character and just all over wonderful that I almost died... Thank you so much for writing this! It is truly fantastic!

This is really good. :) Sorry I can't say anything awe inspiing or something.

*sniffle*

I really like this. Your choices of words and imagery are good, great job :)

I WANT MOAR.

luvd the flaslight description. tis v... something.

YEZ I WANT MOAR.

This is really cute! You captured Naruto and Sasuke really well, although I didn't like Itachi much. :/ The way you showed the friendship of the two is really well done!

I've added this to my favourites. :D

Cute and a little sad in the beginning but a really good one-shot. Keep it up!

Delightful:) Easily the best 'Naruto meets the Uchiha brothers as a child' (and there are a decent number of them) story that I can remember.

Nice touch answering the potential question of, "How does all this stuff happen to Naruto without the Hokage knowing?" Obviously, he lies about it like many victims do.

Excellent job with Naruto's 'voice', the loneliness, fear, boredom, anger, desperate optimism, and other things. Shiver-y job with Itachi, though the red cloud stuff may be a bit much;) Great job with Sasuke as well.

Thanks for sharing!

Kawaii! This story is amazing! And Sasuke is so cute, I love him! Great job!

aww i think you should continue or make a sequal. this is a good story.

aww, you can write little kids very well...I like the foreshadowing of canonstuffs. :)

that. was. awesome.

you portrayed them so well. fantastic job.

"In the end you’re alone, and there is only power."

One word summarizes this whole thing: Perfect.

That was so CUTE! This is the first story of this kind that I've read (Naruto and Sasuke meeting as younger children before the Uchiha massacre) and it was just WAY AWESOME! Your writing style is great too! Keep it up! XD

first off, an award to one uchiha sasuke! secondly, if anybody- and i mean ANYBODY- touches naruto (especially little naruto) i will rip them apart in more places then they even know they have! (: have a nice day

Very metaphore.