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| CosmicPhoenix 2007-03-14 ch 6, | abuseOh my God! That was, great! I really hope Emma could get rid of all that hatred inside her. I now have newfound respect for her. Anyway, I'm going to bed. All this reading has made me exhausted. Tomorrow I'll read another story. I can see why you had fun writing this. |
| CosmicPhoenix 2007-03-13 ch 3, | abuseHi, I just started reading this. Wow! Great story! Can't wait to read the rest of this little series you have going here. |
| RhiannonUK 2006-10-08 ch 4, | abuseI'm seriously beginning to wonder if I should be reading the other stuff concurrently. Can ya EM me and let me know? Cheers. |
| RhiannonUK 2006-10-08 ch 3, | abuseWow! This story has one hell of an undertow. I'm being dragged right along with it. Grin. |
| RhiannonUK 2006-10-08 ch 2, | abuseGreat chapter. I'm hoping I don't need to read the other stories concurrently to keep up. Off to read 3 now... |
| RhiannonUK 2006-10-08 ch 1, | abuseThat's a pretty disparate bunch you've thrown together there. I'm curious to see how they work out. Great use of the Cuckoos too. Wasn't impressed by House of M and gritted my teeth at 198. I found neither storyline impressive. What has impressed me is the way you've taken both storylines by the throat and throttled some interest into them. Well done on that score. The way you tell your story, the spot-on characterisation you employ, makes this so enjoyable. I cannot understand why you are receiving so few reviews when fics that can't even hold a candle to yours get hundreds. I suppose there's no accounting for taste. The only niggle I have is your use of passive voice. However, you tell the story so well the PV fades to insignificance. The fresh perspective you use, your originality within a derivative framework, is superb. So many fics are unimaginitive and recycled to hell. It's so pleasant to come across an author who does not succumb to that, who treads his or her own path. I'm an unashamed Wolvie fan but even his absence hasn't marred what I've just read. I gotta tell ya, I'm not easily impressed. Well done! |
| B Oots 2006-10-05 ch 5, anon. | abuseI am back. I am so enjoying the story. I so looking forward to reading New X-Men #5 "Storm Fronts". |
| B Oots 2006-10-04 ch 4, anon. | abuseI am really enjoying the series. I am looking forward to reading New X-Men #4 "Beauty and the Beast" next. |
| B Oots 2006-09-22 ch 6, anon. | abuseI really enjoyed the story. I am going to read the other parts of the series now. |
| Jo the Phoenix 2006-08-02 ch 6, | abuseSweet! Totally awesome! I can't wait to see what happens! |
| Darlin 2006-07-30 ch 6, | abuseI actually have goosebumps fading on my arms as I'm writing this and I'm once again tearing up but not because of a death or near death, no I'm touched with the sheer magnificence of this story! Never once have you faltered! Your plot continues to be gripping, always intriguing - perfection. This story is full of surprises and oddly enough it has one of my all time favorite couples, Bobby and Jubes even though they're not really a couple and yet there had to be something in the future I'm seeing and I love that! Even Emma is great in this story. I'm getting goosebumps again from just thinking about what I've just read! As always the characterization is so spot on if I didn't know any better I'd swear I was reading an old comic from the good ol' days long gone. I don't think there's a better compliment to give you than that. I bow before your mastery. |
| El Varon 2006-07-24 ch 6, | abuseInteresting turn of events. . . . I'm really interested to see what's going to happen next. |
| kiragecko 2006-07-23 ch 6, | abuseFabulous. Amazing. Real characters, real interactions, action that doesn't come at the expense of plot and character developement. This is what I read for. Thanks yet again for this wonderful series. kiragecko |
| xoXOCutieOXox 2006-07-22 ch 6, | abuse*sigh* I can't believe you are stopping there!! lol I think I'm dying. Once again..Awesome job!! I can't wait for more! (Just so you know I probably looked completely ridiculous while reading this, I was just so into it!) |
| giveGodtheglory 2006-07-22 ch 6, | abuse*collapses* That was awsome. MORE. |