So imagintive. this is well writen and interesting. I loved that they saw aHarry and Ron when the boats reached the castle.

ohyeah100

Wow. This chapter in particular was really good. It was long, and it was good. I have to tell you, I'd be fooled by your Tom Riddle just as easily as Ginny. The whole line where he was like: "Don't worry... I wasn't interested in girls until I was fourteen... Girls mature faster than boys..." That line would have got me. I think you portray Tom as a careful, manipulative villain is perfect. The only bad comment - though not necessarily bad - that I have to say about this chapter is that I don't think Ginny would have been possessed this early in the story. It just seems too soon. Though if Ginny does use chicken blood to write all those messages on the Hogwarts walls, then it makes sense for her to bring the chickens from home, I guess... but that's kind of smelly and disgusting and she'd be bound to notice and wonder why there are dead chickens in her trunk... Now I'm just rambling. Pay no attention. Wonderfully written chapter! Don't take too long to update!

Oh, here comes tom *DUN DUN DUN DUN* Ok, update soon. I want to read more of this.

Aww, Ginny is so sweat. This is a fabulus story. Nice chapter. Update soon.(:

ohyeah100

This could be canon so far. This is really interesting and well done. Nice job on this. UPDATE!

ohyeah100

Oh Ginny! I usually don't like Ginny and Harry apirs, but this was good. Nice job.Update soon.

ohyeah100

Best Chapter Yet!

Oh-Yeah! Loved reading about Ginny standing up to Malfoy! That was great! And I'm just very glad she isn't fooled by Lockhart! I can't remember whether or not she was infatuated with him in the books - I don't think she was. She's completely in love with Harry! So There Lockhart!

That was the perfect way to introduce her to Tom Riddle. I was very impressed with that. Good job.

The only thing that got me was when you misused the word: "There." I don't know whether or not you accidently let that slip or if you just don't know the difference between "there" and "their." Sorry, don't want to make a fuss, but that's my biggest writing pet peeve. That along with the "were's" and "where's," and "your" and "you're." There are differences, and it drives me nuts when people don't realize that.

Anyway, other than that, this chapter was perfect! Can't wait for the next one! Update now!

Janiqua

What a chapter! Poor Ginny... Her entire first year at Hogwarts won't all be about how embarrassed she is around Harry, will it? Oh well. I think you've got a wonderful story here and I hope you keep updating!

I thought it was great. Ilove how it's in Ginny's point of view. It makes it really interesting. You have to write more! I loved in. I wasn't sure if i would like it but it was really good. Write more ASAP.

Great chapter!

It seemed to go a little fast, but that could only be expected. I'm a little confused about who Harry locked where... I don't remember reading that. Then again, I haven't read the first book in ages so... (shrugs)

It was very well written. I can't wait for Ginny to begin her school year. Book Two! It's bound to be interesting. Keep writing!

not bad, what u planin on doin with the story? im guessin yor shippin H/G, u gonna be like books or getem togetha early?

hi hi hi hi me again... I think... this was awsome could have not done better.

Good start! I will be looking forward to reading more!

It good...great... in the words of Harry Brillent