I'd just like to pint out a few things-

1. Red is not Akai. Its aka.
2. Blue is mizu.
3. Aa would dbe "ok"

Dont know what kind of weird translator you're useing or if thats the way you learned japanese, but that was wrong ^^;; sorry, just wanted to fix that, it was bugging the crap out of me.

Good Fanfic.

Okay stop right there. Kaiba/Mokuba that is just sick and wrong. Kaiba loves him as brother not as a boyfriend. At least make it just Kaiba/Joey. Please and thank you

...SEX!

Kath-chan~

Wow. That was good. I admit to being a bit disturbed by the side pairing, but that has nothing to do with the quality of the writing. I did enjoy the playful nature of Seto and Mokuba's relationship though.

lol, Jou is loosing at instant duel monsters. That was funny, good stuff in that. Liked how it started.
later...
-Yashe

Ah, good stuff.

Uke!Seto is the best thing in the world.

good fic.

update soon I love it I love it! I can't put it in words...