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Raanah
2009-11-08 . chapter 1
Hi,
Its not really a widely known fact but Montague is known only by his surname in the Harry Potter books. His first name is given in the Harry Potter: Quidditch World Cup video game, making him one of two Slytherins named Graham, the other being Graham Pritchard.
Just so you know for your future fics.
Well done, btw, this one's great =)
xx
Raanah
Caileigh
2009-10-18 . chapter 1
Very lovely sequel!
Really, I can't add much here anymore... the situation was FUNNY, I can assure you, and I especially liked how you just made something (pretty good) out of a small coincidence, or rather circumstance that you arranged. I thought it was very sweet to get that glimpse of Marcus and Katie again, too... of course, something had to develop between those two. :D

And the part after that! Montague can be so diverting and romantic, it's great to notice something like that. I have to quote a phrase now:

"Sometimes you have to decide if it's more important what you want or what you need." Montague replied and caught her lips in another kiss, giving her no time to reply.

- awesome line! At first so, uhm, involuntary (and mean - poor Angelina having to dance with that Eustace, and poor Montague, getting hit with the shoes +giggles+), and then she gives in and... yeah, somehow it fits.
And I loved the end. Not too much description and a simple sentence referring to the dialogue. Again, I can't offer you any criticism, sorry.

Keep it up!
TriGemini
2007-02-17 . chapter 1
This was good to read. Really enjoyed it.

Sounds as if Angelina was willing to take the risk with Montague after all.
DaOnLeeSam
2006-12-29 . chapter 1
aww i love it. you should write a sequel.
FanofSlytherins7711
2006-07-31 . chapter 1
aww i love it.. the montague, angelina relationship always makes me smile. it was really cute i like it a lot good work!
HarryPotterObsessed
2006-04-21 . chapter 1
that was kool to! i love all your one shots!!
flx
2006-04-06 . chapter 1
wieso schreibst du nichts mehr auf deutsch? :(
Evilevergreen
2006-03-26 . chapter 1
Aw, how cute.

My favorite part was when the four came face to face. That was just too funny.
Blues
2006-03-23 . chapter 1
Nun, was soll ich nach meinen Vorrednern da noch hinzufügen? Hinreißend, einfach perfekt. Absolut bezaubernd, wie es wohl irgendwie nur diese beiden können. Und - wie vor allem du es kannst.
Weiter, mehr. Viel mehr.
akkie
2006-03-23 . chapter 1
COOL!
TeahWeah
2006-03-23 . chapter 1
Breathtaking. I love Dance, but this one is far more beautiful.

The shoes poking parts are too funny, by the way. What a couple.
LongingforLlangarlia
2006-03-22 . chapter 1
I've nothing to say about this piece really because it speaks for itself. It's beautiful. It makes me believe in fairy tales almost. I don't know it's hard to explain, that's why I said that it speaks for itself. But it's well done and I'm very fond of it. Beautiful.
Die Lady
2006-03-22 . chapter 1
ich finde es toll, dass du weiter geschrieben hast - und wie du weiter geschrieben hast gefällt mir auch sehr gut.
Hunnyquebee
2006-03-22 . chapter 1
That was perfect. I hope you are going to do another chapter. Montague and Angelina are such a cute couple. Well as always good job and can't wait for the next bit! peace
Hunny Kaps
SupernaturalKnight88
2006-03-22 . chapter 1
I loved this story, it was so cute with the two couples in that situation, I didn't see you, you didn't see me. Great job with the details, I loved the character pairing! I loved at the end the whole I'm Brave!
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