Actually, the thing that had me wondering was if "god" is an appropriate exclamation within this universe. They don't seem to have that concept, so it wouldn't make sense to have it as a swear.

Awesome fic even so.

It is definetely hot in that bizarre and sad way of Daemon and Lucivar's sex life before they became free men. I like it.

To Hedgen. Thanks for lecturing Mephis.

I know I make a lot of mistakes being a foreigner but one should't critize spelling etc. when one doesn't have a clue how to do it right oneself.

This is cool, a nice little dark moment between those two. And the ability to instantly vanish pants? I'm not sure if that's cheating or brilliant but I'm sure Daemon's never abused that particular skill (yeah right!) ;D

And to Mephis? The author's punctuation is better than yours: "You're" should have been "Your", and your review implies that capital letters are for randomly sprinkling like confetti across a sentence.

I would like to ask that you change the authors note at the bottom of the page because while it may be true that Beltain is a holiday in the Black Jewels Trilogy it is also a verified holiday for Pagans, of which I am one, and it is not only for sex but it is mainly for the celebration of life and the welcoming of spring and it is closer to March than Febuary so it's not exactly a Valentines Day celebration eather. Thank you, though for metioning it. It's nice to see people interested in other holidays other than the comertialised ones. Ja ne!

Lovely.

loved it. i love those books, and those two r just awsome, i have such a hard time finding stuff on them two.

you're lack of punctuation is distracting...and also, they don't have God in the black jewels world.

pretty boring, considering nothing really happened.

also, i don't like the Lucivar/Daemon chemistry...that's probably why I'm being such a bastard about this.