Finale... or not finale?? Umm, i fear the poor Rita have to suffer soon... Nevertheless, i enjoy the Galion-burn, likely, i wish the devil will finish thus (evil grin) I'll congratulate you,by now your achievements are very very predictables; no surprise nevermore, even if in this fic, when you take a new
direction, with touchs of dramatism and "supernatural" mystery. Well done, author, ah, and i banned you blamed yourself for some lack of reviews, you know us the readers, don't you? Well, i repeat again with each fis: YOU ARE VERY talented, and you "must" write more, more and more, would be comedic, dramtic, ironic, etc, etc.
Please, please, please!

before, priceless chat between Steed and Cathy, very well done. And now i think... very few fics i see with this pair, a shame.
In this chapter, magnific climax, with the struggle with the "Magus", a twin scene with the real "Warlock" (my first
episode in old TB b & w, long time ago) and the final sentence: "Spare the rod and spoil the child, I always say."
very, very Steediana.

In this chapter i chose the interview-confession of Steed and One-Ten in the church. Is bloody good!
"Try to rise above your usual level of incompetence."
"Thank you, Father, for those kind words."
"Go in peace," came the surly reply. MASTER!

You make a brilliant characterization of the nasty Gallion(i liked how you show Gallion's chums too), and the brief chat with Cathy was priceless.

The "non-negotiable" cloisonsés... you are a genoius if are capable of writing sentences like this... but about the plot, i fear for the girl. I think Galion is more devious than Rita believe.

Oh, "Warlock", this one was my first Avenger episode in my 2° Century (i see the original in the 70s)and i love this "dark" chapter. Cathy are very brave and clever then. I want see Rita now.

Nice job. Unusual, and Steed is recognizably Steed. Rita Fox is a well realized character quite different from Steed's other partners.

I'm loving your work so far, very addictive stuff indeed :)

Wow... This was really fun. Now, I'll have to go back and read some of your earlier ones.

What a devilishly good story. (Sorry, couldn't resist the temptation :-)) I really do enjoy your writing and look forward eagerly to all your posts. Can't wait for further developments with Cosmo Gallion.