the chapters in between the first and the last are so peyton centered. i mean, yeah it was all about conversations bout luke and brooke, but its always about peyton, they talk about them, but it always goes bak to peyton.

and the last part was a bit vague. i mean, i kinda expected it to be more detailed, romantic and emotional.

but thats just me.

but hey, i still do love your story

i dont do reviews on first chapters. but ill make an exception..

you really are a good writer. this first chapter got me hooked right away. you know youre characters well and you depict them exactly as they are in the series. which is good.

it is really an interesting read rather than thinking otherwise and trying to pretend different characteristics for the characters. you know what i mean?

keep up the good work.

wow, i read this entire story in two seatings and i absolutely love it. You are a wonderful and talented writer and you know brucas well enough that your characterization of them is perfect and brings out their best qualities, like their banter and easy attitude and their feelings for each other. I think you wrote Peyton really well too, without making her into a complete whiny, emo ** like some writers are prone to and I really liked Naley's involvement in this, especialy Nathan's observations and Haley's meddling. I loved all the characters in this story, but especially brucas. This was incredible :)

Yana

Good story.
I like how is was opposite from the show he was after brooke but with for peyton. They had there time but after a while he wanted brooke. It true leyton are to alike they have no spark or difference but, brucas are totally different i am glad they all worked it out and brucas are together.

But peyton was a bit too mad in opinion. She did have every reason to be mad at them. But still she could of let them talk and explain everything. But whats a story w/o all the drama. So all they did was kiss and luke told brooke how he felt. Yeah he was wrong he should of told peyton and broken up with her first.

this story isn't was good as hidden weeds flower, just so you know

Oh, my god! Thank you so much for writing this!
It took me about three and a half hours to read it all, and I need to tell you that it honestly is the best fanfiction I have ever, EVER read. You really made the characters real to me. I almost read it out loud because you got me so into it, and I saw the actors in front of me saying the lines. Oh god bless you, for being such an amazing writer!

I know that it is a long time since you have written this story but I still wanted to review just to tell you that I have really enjoyed it very much and that it is one of the best stories I have read so far, and believe me when I say that I have read a lot! hehe. I have also read almost every other story that you have written and I love them all:) keep up the good work and I hope you won't stop writing Brucas because you do it well;)

okay i wanted to review every last chapter of this, but i couldnt stop reading (since i read it straight through) so heres my review. this is freaking AMAZING and i am SO happy i came across it. youre writing is beautiful and everything just WORKED. so realistic, so perfect. amazing jobb! :)!

aw i loved this story!

LOVED IT UPDATE SOON

hey...i haven't read past chapter 1, but I can see that it is good. I like that Brooke is not as clingy as One Tree Hill made her in season 4-when the show went to the bad place! hahahaha. i'm gonna keep reading!

I guess it’s no secret that this is among the last One Tree Hill fanfictions I’ll be writing due to personal reasons as well as fandom. The fandom has changed considerably. Or maybe it’s not changed, but it’s become a very difficult place to stay in. The show isn’t the same as it once was either. Sure, it has its moments of awesomeness but I don’t think I’m the only one who feels that they’re watching a completely different show that is more concerned about ratings than staying true to their characters.

omg - i could not agree more

i miss seasons 1 - 3 and how things actually made sense, and people meant what they said

season 4 has just been a series of random event, to target younger audiences and create needless drama to draw people in

oh - and make brooke out to be the biggest backstabbing ** EVER

makes me really sad cause the show used to mean alot to me

i'm sad you're gonna stop writing fanfics though... i mean they are my only source of oth pleasure anymore, cause the show sucks SO much

it really is like a completely different show - i hate so much about it, it's really unrecognizable

but i do love to watch my old dvd's - especially seasons 1 and 2!

i hope you reconsider writing more fics - i mean based off seasons 1 - 3, or AU ones! cause you are so talented

and even though brucas has been trashed on the show, and torn down to glorify leyton, they are still the best on screen couple i have ever seen, thanks to chad and sophia's chemistry

so i hope you will carry on, i know it's hard to be inspired

but if not, then thanks for everything cause your writing is amazing, and it's gotten me through some pretty low brucas times

you ROCK!

and brucas will always mean alot more to me than any other on screen couple - in the real life sense aswell (chopia)

and we got the memories!

man i really hate peyton, which mean you're writing her so in character

yeah - be mad at lucas, i mean he was the one who kept going after brooke

but brooke did NOTHING wrong, and she's pulling the victim thing and she's just so up her of arse that it's ridiculous

sorry, but i hate her on the show and in stories!

brooke has done nothing wrong - on the show peyton actually betrayed brooke too

stupid hoe!

aw no!

i can't take this sadness!

aw no

stupid peyton

i mean brooke's never done anything wrong AT ALL!