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| Lt Allen Garnnet 2006-09-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseGreat Story. By the way did you know that General Alistar and I have the same name. Except I have the name alistaIr. With an i between the a and r. Anyway Keep up the good work. Goodluck. |
| Riley 2005-04-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis story was exetionaly well wrtten, i was very impresed. keep at it! |
| kiara 2005-03-11 ch 2, anon. | abusethat storie was tight...! |
| [R.S.adml]Weazel 2004-04-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis Fic is Awsome. Im a longstanding Battlezone 2 fan. I had My own clan for a while but i quit playing and my clan died. Email me if you get the time i would like to see you in BZ2 sumtime. Later Brandon Horowitz AKA Admiral Weazel |
| humanboy144 2004-03-29 ch 1, anon. | abusethis story rocked |
| Dlord 2004-03-18 ch 1, anon. | abusereally good. I can't wait for more. good names. |
| Dax 2002-12-06 ch 5, anon. | abusei guess this ain't ever gonna be finished DAMN i just found tghis fic and now i'll never know the end damn damn damn awell it was a great story mate too bad it turned into a phantom. |
| Tramar Pettaway 2002-03-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseWhat Up? I heard the Battle Zone was a hotty movie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
| Margaret Rennie 2001-06-23 ch 5, | abuseWhoa! I think that this story is first class, involving, well plotted and detailed without getting the reader lost in minutiae. You really move the narrative along at a clip, which made the story addictive. The appearance of author names came as a surprise, and interfered just a little with staying lost in the story. But that is personal taste and not really a fault of the story I guess. But all in all I think this is as good a storyline as any I've seen in TV series or on film. |
| son of bruce lee 2001-06-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseobviously u no nothing of hand 2 hand combat? where are the vampires? |
| PlasmaBomb 2001-05-24 ch 5, | abuseTeee Heee. I know where you sleep..... (O: |
| mya 2001-01-06 ch 1, | abuseAnother great installment! I actually thought "commander" Paddy was going to buy the farm for a minute there...! Looking forward to the next part |
| Trent Roman 2001-01-02 ch 1, | abuseBoring? Not at all. I found it to be rather amusing, in fact. There's nothing funny about court-marshals, but I liked how the squadron members had to rush to get rid of the evidence, especially the part where Pyro's team has to hide in crates. It looks like the cast members are all here now. Gee, I wonder who the man with the scar is :-) |
| Der Drache 2001-01-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseMust . . . resist . . . story too good . . . Oh, just catch me if I fall, Manfred! ;) |
| Zap Rowsdower 2001-01-02 ch 1, | abuseThis is a victory for GOOD! Sure were hiding contraband stuff from the authorities...but still. Great job Admiral Kelley! Lets get the next one out...cant wait to see what happens to us next. Gummi Bears anyone? ZAP! |