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| Sk8er765 2006-07-07 ch 12,  | abusegreat job! i'm new here and i just read the whole story( which is still unfinished) and it's great! plz continue! |
| kingdom219 2006-06-07 ch 12, | abuseBRAVO! Is that the end? keep going if not, but great job if it was! |
| inmyWHITETEEnTAURASIs 2006-06-06 ch 12, anon. | abuseThis has quite honestly been one of the best JN fics I have read to date. The complexity of the characters shines through beautifully. Unlike most fics of this ficdom, the characters are, for the lack of a better word, real. There's only a couple minor OOC's/improbable situations but, hey, that is what ff's are for. 10 of 10 stars. |
| mrmuscle 2006-06-06 ch 12, | abusegreat ending to a great story. i would recommend a sequel, however, if you were to end the story here, that would be just fine by me! thank you for such an impressive story! |
| retroville9 2006-06-06 ch 12, | abuseYeah, you're pretty much the best author on this site so far. You're an amazing author. Own it. |
| Mad P 2006-06-06 ch 12, anon. | abuseCa c'est le fin? C'est magnifique! Chapeau et merci pour votre bonne histoire! Bonne chance avec l'avenir! |
| badwolf1 2006-06-06 ch 12, | abuseAn excellent finale! What a story, I hope to see Innrer Darkness updated soon! "Fantastic!" |
| Piano Prodigy 2006-06-06 ch 12, | abuseVery good ending I really liked this story and I will be reading Inner Darkness. Good job with this story. |
| mysticofthepen 2006-06-06 ch 12, | abuse*sniff* That was beautiful! I'm sorry that it is over. Can't wait for your new works! |
| ReddistheRose 2006-06-05 ch 12, | abuseMasterful. I loved the ending- the irony of flippy's destroying himself, Jimmy's closure with his dad, and Cindy's support at the end. It left the reader satisfied...maybe not a perfectly happy ending, but complete- knowing that Jimmy and Cindy will be able to move on from the pain...together. Thank you for the ride! -Rose Redd |
| acosta perez jose ramiro 2006-06-05 ch 12, | abuseWonderful ending! The good-bye scene between Hugh and Jimmy was greatly done. Keep the good writing. |
| greg9570 2006-06-05 ch 12, | abuseNot only the best author, but now best story out of the 500 some on this site. You're just running away with these accolades, aren't you? |
| greg9570 2006-06-02 ch 7, | abuseYou have now become the best author on this site. |
| badwolf1 2006-06-01 ch 11, | abuseIs Jimmy too late? Good description of Cindy losing her intelligence, other you wouldn't need a next chapter! "Fantastic!" Update soon! |
| greg9570 2006-05-31 ch 6, | abuseYea, so there's a little "him" and "him" error, like qwerty-kitties said. Big whoop! A slight pronoun error. Happens to everyone. It's still one of the best fanfics I've ever read, despite the diminutive error. I wish I had only one error in my stories. Am I envious? Perhaps. |