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damck
2008-06-19
ch 25,
abuseOh please finish this (on knees begging)
berrica
2008-06-02
ch 25,
abuseOK, I'll beg with this story like I have with the other unfinished stories I've read lately. Please finish this story? Please? Its so cute, I really want to know how it turns out with Hodgela and I want to know what the wedding is like. You're definitely a very talented writer! OK, so I feel like I'm being whiny, that's not how this is supposed to sound, but pleasepleasepleasepleaseplease finish this!
Only October Girl
2008-05-15
ch 8,
abuseFirst of all, I would like to say that this is a very intriguing story. I really like it. What irks me though, is that Booth had every right to be angry and ** off and such but instead you gave that right to Brennan who was totally in the wrong. I don't believe that EVERY father should have a say in what happens to an unexpected baby in an unmarried couple but people like Booth - who are very caring, responsible, and honorable - have the right to anger as they were the wronged party.

Sorry, just had to get that off my chest. I do like the story other than that part.
lisaluvsfox22
2008-04-03
ch 25,
abuseAH! OMG! I love this story! It's so heartfelt and so freaking hilarious! I love all the snide quips and innuendos! It's like a step up from the show, I love it! Hodgins is so funny! And Angela...i have definately found my favorite Bones story! I can't wait for more!
Angel By Friends
2008-01-17
ch 25,
abuseDude, I LOVE THIS! Are you writing more for it? It is awesome. Seriously. ~A.
LittleDrusilla
2008-01-06
ch 25,
abuseI really like this. It's exactly how I would picture it happening if Bones were to get pregnant by accident. It's really sweet and very funny! I hope to see more!
Dirty Little Butterfly
2007-11-08
ch 25,
abuse^_^ Whoa, me love it.

haha, loved Hodgins line about how Booth REALLY need to take her to the movies.

Waiting patiently, or atleast trying to, for the next part.
Greatly written. Keep up the good work! :)
Lizet M
2007-10-25
ch 25,
abuseYou MUST update this soon, its soo good, an I want to keep on reading!

Great job, on like everything you do, and update! :D
mumrulz
2007-10-07
ch 24,
abuseOk...so it does look like you have forgotten this story despite your A/N on the last chapter. LOL.

I was just checking up on whether anything had been added since my last visit, but alas no. Found myself re-reading it again. Still love it & makes me even more determined to pester you even more. A year is a long time! :-) :-) :-)
mumrulz
2007-09-07
ch 25,
abuseI hope that you haven't forgotten about this fic as I would love to read it to the end.
irony882
2007-07-21
ch 25,
abuseThis is a terrific story! Sorry, but I had to get that off my chest.

You've done excellently with the humour, and you've created realistic (it could happen on the show) conflict between Brennan and Booth, as well as Angela and Hodgins. When Hodgins and Angela were discovered in the closet by Booth, I laughed hysterically at Hodgins' lines. Then I laughed again.

This story is now on my Story Alerts list; I'm keeping a VERY careful eye out for updates! ;)
WeHaveACase
2007-06-15
ch 22,
abuse"And here's--" When the doors opened and Booth's eyes settled on its occupants, his expression slipped to a frown. "Hodgins and Angela."

Angela waved sheepishly while Hodgins lamely replied to an amused-looking Tempe, "We come with the room."

Tempe chuckled. "What are you guys doing here?"

Hodgins eyed the annoyed look on Booth's face. "We're... definitely wishing we could teleport back to the lab right about now."



I definitely laughed out loud...god that was funny...great chapter!
JenB
2007-06-05
ch 25,
abuseLoving this story. The last couple of chapters have had moments that made me laugh out loud, literally. Please post more soon! I need something to get me through the Summer hiatus!

JenB
Sarcastic102391
2007-05-15
ch 25,
abusei can't beleive this story is twenty five chapters and still the ending is not present it is a great story but where is the ending please finish please finish
Alexis Jaymie Goin
2007-05-01
ch 25,
abuseSo, uhh, 6 months huh? Guess I'm not getting any more on this one anytime soon eh? *curls up under her desk and cries* Sorry, I'm moody this week. That's what happens when I stop fighting with my muse.
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