That was pretty incredible, I think you may have hit Furiae dead on.

Oh man.
How the hell can you think this wasn't convincing, you... um... person, for lack of a better synonyms.

Q.Q i love it

Wow. That. Was. Freaking. Amazing. The whole insanity cycle, the breakdown of logic, the overwhelming desire to hide; you got it all in their. My hat's off to you.

holy crap... that percives her emotions exactly as in the game... wish i could write stuff like that. like how you put growing wings in there

This was AWESOME! I love the way you delve into Furiae's thoughts and feels so well. You depicted all the characters perfectly. Good job! No, GREAT JOB! *thumbs way up* Continue the awesome work!

This was so amazing... nothing with Furiae has ever moved me so much as this. All of this is exactly what was said in the game, and it was so truthful to her character... this was incredible. I love how you ended it with a few lines from Growing Wings. It makes it seem even more like her. I loved this so much, thank you for writing it... it has somehow brightened my day!^-^

I really like the way you portray Furiae, and Caim. It's sad how in the game, Furiae suffers no matter what you do.

Wow! This is great!
I think this story depicts Furiae well :)

Wootie!! I'm surprised you remember the lines from the event mission and the movie that well if you haven't played in so long... Wonderful memory powers! I think you did all right on Furiae... I'm not really a big fan of her either, so my guess is as good as yours, I suppose. Good job! I wanna read more!

This was well written, convincing, and I LOVED IT!! Expescially the ending. Furiae's madness.. it.. was just great. I can't wait to read otherfuture works from you :D

For not playing the game in a while, you did a really good job! Furiae was done very well. I hope to see more stories from you.