I'd agree with most of the recent reviewers: this fanfic is too good to just let it sit incomplete. I was happy that I found this fanfic while going through the achieves with nothing else to do. Then I noticed that it hasn't been updated in almost 3 years, which is sad to see. Hopefully you'll come back to finish it or pass it on to someone who is capable of finishing it while keeping its unique style of Japanese/English usage.

This is a good story that I would like to see completed, but it seems you, like many others, can't or won't. I cannot understand your reason, but I do hope to see you continue with this story.

This is probably a long shot request but I'm still hoping that the author would continue the story...

For me this is the best story so far... and I believe that I am not alone on that opinion... it would be such a shame if it would be left unfinished

please update ... I really love this hope you show some more of SHinn in here

Love how u integrated history into this fic. cant wait for more

great chapter cant wait to see what happens next

Hi,

Hisashiburi da ne...well...its been a while since you churned out a chapter...regardless of whether this is/becomes angsty or not...I strongly recommend that you continue with this story...I find it quite intriguing...

But if you want to just drop it...that's cool as well...although if you've gotten stuck/need ideas, I'd be happy to help however I can.

Ja ne!

like the first 10 chapters and hope to see the next up soon

this chapter was a pretty good one although I wonder whats going to happen next

Cool very cool sheds some light here also plz upate soon.

Truly amazing story. My favourite one^_^ Truly amazing plot, incredibly original idea, wonderful characters, and an amazing writing style! It goes very in-depth with Kira, which is wonderful to read. It really draws the reader in, and it's rather hard to stop reading xD. Tremendously well done! Props for the amazing work!

Wow, I really like this story for many reasons.

It's nice to see so much history incorporated into a fanfic, especially with an anime that I love. It's a great story and it's going to be great as it progresses.

Also, I'm currently learning the Bushido. I attend Togakure Budo Ryo classes which teach samurai moves, both seiza and iaido postures, and the ettiquette of the way of the samurai, including the Japanese names for all of the moves, postures, parts of the sword and the names of the parts of the moves. It teaches moves that have been combined from different samurai schools and my Sensei trained in Japan for 10 years. It's intreseting to see the other part of Bushido in this fanfic: the culture of the Shogunate Japan.

If you need any help with samurai moves or the names of postures to make the fanfic more realistic, don't hesitate to contact me *smiles*

I look forward to more chapters! Keep up the great work!

is this a falshback?? lol, yay your still writing!!

Great chapter, nice work, looking forward to more

Aw. Poor Kira:(. I am still curious what has happened to him after this. It is getting really interesting. Please update soon.