|Reviews for Harry Potter and the Slytherin Prince|
| Iwa Shinju 3/12/13 . chapter 43
I'm not sure whether you're still reading the reviews you get to this story, but not leaving one just because you might not seemed far to ungrateful, after I've spent so much time enjoying it.
I like the plot, for the simply reason that it's both convincing and interesting. You don't depict Harry as a weakling, but neither morph him into a superhero overnight.
The only complaints I have are purely technical and could probably be easily overcome by a good beta reader. Firstly, frequent typos, especially in names. Secondly, inconsistency as far as the tenses are concerned. Just in this chapter, for example: "Using some wandless magic, which was untraceable by the Ministry, Harry turns his walking stick into a normal wooden one with a curved handle, grows his hair out, turns it blonde, turns his eyes blue, ages himself and then pulls out a vial from his pocket and downs it quickly". Why 'was' and then 'turns' etc.? Either past or present. Lastly, Cho was most certainly and definitely a Ravenclaw NOT a Hufflepuff. Have a look at "Harry Potter and the Prisoner of Azkaban", she's then a Seeker for Claws, while Cedric is one for Puffs.
Having it out of the way, I wanted to compliment you on all of your characters. I won't pretend I've liked all of them, but I do appreciate that they are all consistent. I hope you will someday find a time to write a sequel.
| nintschibintschi 2/23/13 . chapter 42
Great story thank you so much love to read more nintschi
| Serpent de Lune 1/4/13 . chapter 3
Super histoire, qui s'annonce prometteuse.
| Larisya 12/30/12 . chapter 8
I still don't think a schoolteacher can ban someone for life. For the rest of school, sure, but not after. Also, it was no Quiddich, not no flying so she had no grounds whatsoever to steal the brooms.
| Aldryne21 11/2/12 . chapter 1
Perfectly brilliant story!
| cfaithcsf 10/28/12 . chapter 1
Quite a few background mistakes but interesting story all the same. Still wondering about the sequel though... its been years
| Blacktipped Angelwings 10/14/12 . chapter 43
Loved the story
| Laurenmk20 10/13/12 . chapter 20
Blaise is NOT a female. Ugh!
| LadyFreak 7/8/12 . chapter 43
damn... i've read this story through and it was fantastic! But i'm highly disappointed there's no sequel
| LadyFreak 7/8/12 . chapter 32
i am laughing so hard at this chapter. You are brilliant my dear!
| rainbowmonFTW 7/8/12 . chapter 43
I love this story! Good job, the ending is awesome. Well done, I can't wait until the sequel comes. I admit I nearly hit my screen when I realised there was no more, but I'm glad you're continuing to the seventh book. Thanks for the story and I hope the writing and university goes well for you.
| ShortySC22 4/29/12 . chapter 43
I just read this story and really enjoyed how you wrote all of the characters. I like how you developed the friendship between Harry and Snape and Harry and Draco. Great story and I only wish you had posted the sequel.
| Darklight-phoenix 4/25/12 . chapter 23
Loving the exchange of presents! Haha, the rare plant swatted Severus' hands :D
| Woodland Spirit 12/4/11 . chapter 43
Love the story can't wait for year seven!
| Woodland Spirit 12/4/11 . chapter 37
When Harry is telling Ron about his day he says he saved an 8 year old, but during the flash back the little girls mother says she just turned 5, So I thought I let you know encase you wanted to fix it.