 hellbomb 2008-11-26 . chapter 4i like this story are you going to continue writing?
i hope so |
 Ereana 2008-09-26 . chapter 4Please update soon i really love this story |
 Dark Predator Dragon 2008-06-30 . chapter 4Hello! This is the first time iI've read this story and I this it is really good. I hope you update soon, I really wan to know hat happens to Kassy and Pohatu. |
 Arya-Metru 2008-06-16 . chapter 4*explodes from happiness*
Yay!
:) |
 Deadly Fangs 2008-06-13 . chapter 3You have got to update this story soon. PLEASE! I need to know what the surprise is! |
 Ketsudan (Formerly "Enjahu") 2006-10-29 . chapter 3 This should be interesting. You spelling and grammar need work, but the story itself should ultimately prove interesting...fufufufufu...
And by the by, look for a user with the word "Ketsudan" somewhere in the penname on or after Nov. 4th. Ketsudan is Japanese for "determination" (At least, I think it is...) |
 Flame Lady a.k.a. Ruby Autobot 2006-08-02 . chapter 3It's me, Kim, More Please! |
 Flames Chaos and Wolf 2006-06-01 . chapter 3MORE! |
 Arya-Metru 2006-05-13 . chapter 3this is the best story ever! |
 bionicle-girl 2006-05-11 . chapter 3What's the surprise?! This is so suspenseful! Please update it soon! |
 greenswind and cheesedude 2006-05-09 . chapter 3GW: Woo Hoo! it's getting interesting. Poor Kassy. I bet I know what the suprise is! it's...
Tahu: -clamps hand over GW's mouth- That's enough sigar for one day young lady! no more blabbering your opinion to anyone right now. who knows what'll come out of that trap today?
GW:mpf (good bye) |
 Whale Shark 7 2006-05-09 . chapter 3I wonder what Pohatu's surprise is...
Pohatu and Toa start singing: You're now a part, a part of the family...!
Kassy: (in shock) Gee...thanks...
Hehe. Just a thought. =) Good story. 'Tis amusing. ^_^ Keep up the good work. |
 shadow dragon04 2006-05-09 . chapter 3Yay *throws confetti* you wrote a new chapter awsome ^_^ i really liked this =3 and i can't wait to see what happens when she meets the other Toa should be hillarious to read =D please write the next chapter please can't wait to read the next chapters to your stories ^_^ |
 hordikanui 2006-05-09 . chapter 3wonderful chapter^_^I love that story. |
 Kim Kinne 2006-05-08 . chapter 3 More please! |