NICE! I realy liked it. Can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the great work.

I love this story! Cant wait for the next chapter! I was wondering how you were going to incorporate elmira into the story line and this is a wonderful addition!

Thank you for the new part. I really enjoyed it and cannot wait for the next one.

Great chapter I want more!!

wow...that was fast! i cant wait for another chapter! this one was wonderful.