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newXmoonXfox
2009-11-07 . chapter 6
*claps* More soon I beg you!
timme
2009-10-02 . chapter 3
yikes, to give a family heirloom to his mother's second husband...who he seems to have a formal relationship with more than anything is a bit disrespectful. ~shrugs~ ah well.t
various crimes
2009-09-29 . chapter 6
Wow! I can't wait until you update- Kurama is finally going to start living with the "beast". I read the original story a very long time ago so I don't know it very well, but it seems as if you took ideas from both the story and the Disney film. For example the line- this does not concern you- is similar to- She's no longer your concern- and Kurama says I gave my word, it is just like when Belle says- You have my word.
Oh man I guess I'll have to reread the story after I finish your YYH version of the story!
juniper
2009-07-25 . chapter 6
Yay! You updated! I must admit I had nearly given up hope. I really hope that you continue on with this story, I would love to see how Hiei and Kurama's relationship progresses. I loved Kurama's interaction with the horses and Hiei's reaction to Kurama standing firm on his promise to remain. Thank you muchly for the story, and may the muse strike again soon!
Taroschain
2009-04-07 . chapter 6
Wow, awesome story so far! They really do seem to fit those roles well, and I can't wait to see your take on the rest of the story! ^__^
BlueUtopiah
2009-01-23 . chapter 6
Hiei is so Hiei in this. And Kurama is such a loyal yet naive man. His honor is crazy.

The whole part where he stabled the horses and then found the stallion and the mare was very very sweet. That black stallion is defintely Hiei. They so have the same temperament.

And Hiei can't resist himself, he's going to be on top of his guest in no time!

As ususal, a wonderful read. This is very very rich and fantasical. I love it.
thoth-moon
2009-01-16 . chapter 6
Nice to see an update to this one ^^ First night and poor Kurama's already getting sticked with the housework and the yardwork, *sigh* But having already earned something higher than contempt or disinterest, it'll be interesting to see where he and "the little man" go from here once Hatanaka's left in the morning.
inspiration-arts
2009-01-15 . chapter 6
C'mon! Don't leave us hanging! Write more! Preferably 4 or 5 very long chapters...
happydemonhobo
2009-01-15 . chapter 6
Sorry I didn't find this until today, I love the part of "As you wish" it reminds me of "The Princess Bride" one of my fav movies.
Tala ishtar
2009-01-14 . chapter 6
THANK YOU! i hope that you update it soon i want to see what happens.
shiorifoxiesmom
2009-01-14 . chapter 6
Good chapter. I can't wait for Hatanaka to go home so we can see our boys interact one on one. Update sooner. ;)
L Lexuran
2009-01-14 . chapter 6
Yay! A review! o.0 Kurama sure makes a cute little housemaid. *giggle* Can't wait to see what happens next with the sleeping arrangements. Thanks for the update!
Haiku Kitten
2009-01-14 . chapter 6
Oh, yay, I'm s excited to see this update! And it was definitely well worth the wait, I'm just astounded by how well this fits the Beauty and the Beast theme and Yu Yu Hakusho at the same time. Magnificent, really! And I loved the ending, very reminiscent of their friendship in the series. Overall, a lovely chapter. I'll be patiently waiting for the next one! =3
kittyfoxy
2007-10-23 . chapter 5
I never really like fairytales but this one just got me hooked! My jaw is practically hit the floor and this story is so awesome! I'm speechless because there just so much to say, but it just won't come out!

The story is getting so interesting and you stopped!! It was like riding a roller-coaster but it stopped in the middle of the air because the theme park owner don't pay the electric bill so the responsible company or goverment or whoever it was avenging by cutting the electric supply to the theme park!

Ahem..not that I'm protesting that you stopped there and sorry for bluffing. btw,please update soon... I'm eager to see how will Hiei treats Kurama, wether like a slave or as a friend. And somehow I prefer the former..
juniper
2007-10-14 . chapter 1
I forget if I warned you this would happen, but here's my reread-story-and-remembered-just-how-fabulous-it-is review. I really hope you haven't abandoned this story because it's a really interesting idea and I very much want to see how it plays out and your writing style is very lyrical and gives the story the weight of "once upon a time." So I really hope that you haven't abandoned it because I am very much looking forward to reading more.
Thanks.
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