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| dfghjgf 2007-03-12 ch 1,  | abuseThat was so sad, and written really well I think. :favorites: =] |
| EmikoKun 2006-11-30 ch 1, | abuseThis story made me cry. But I loved it. Oh my... Im favorite-ing this! |
| Maatlockk 2006-11-12 ch 1, | abuseohohohoohohoho...that was a frightful situation. at least you didn't sound 100% like stephen king. the man can really drag on and on. but hey, his books were the first adult novels i ever read. I do wish that the whole story had more detail thugh. overall a good read. kudos! |
| Joop 2006-08-14 ch 1, | abuseWow. All I can say. I love the way you wrote this. Also love the confusion I get from it. I'm still not certain what's going on at the end, but that doesn't make it any less enjoyable, regardless of however many times I read it. Great job! |
| Lilune-E. 2006-03-28 ch 1, | abuseTeehee, I love this kind of stories! It suits this Fanfiction perfectly, since it makes the readers confused at first. Like Irvine's confused whether or not he can shoot the kidnapper without hitting Selphie too. And, as far as I'm concerned, you should definately continue with this writing style. It creates such a mysterious sphere around the whole story that it makes you want to read on and on. Which can only be good -.~ |
| -X-.Giggles.-X- 2006-03-26 ch 1, | abuseso...di selphie die? gee im confused...i can tell it was a good fic though lol i like the writing style. |
| Ben-hayag 2006-03-24 ch 1, | abuseI think I get it then again mabye not. This is a really good story and you should write more like this |
| Paper Bear 2006-03-24 ch 1, | abuseAh, this is good, but I'm still confused. |
| Aleksis 2006-03-24 ch 1, | abuseI like it. It was somewhat confusing at first, and at the beginning I thought Selphie was being delightfully twisted and asking Irvine to shoot her, then I realised that it was the voice of the kidnapper. Still, interestingly written. :) |
| liquidzilla 2006-03-24 ch 1, | abusehm. This is an interesting fanfic and it had me confused untill i got to the end but yeah, i like your style. |
| Andrea Roberts 2006-03-23 ch 1, | abuseO.o... um... it was really good but it didn't make much sense, although I think that's what you were going for to confuse the readers a little? But I liked all the same! |
| Irvine 2006-03-23 ch 1, | abuseJust two words... Very good! :) |