truely amazing *clapping* I truely loved this story, from its rough begining, to the fights, to the passion, and more importently to the devlopment of the characters additude. I truely got hooked onto it and i'm glad I did, the final battle caught me the most and to that I congratulate you. I would so love to see a epilogue to such a awsome story ^^, but however in the end it is up to you to decide that.

Damn, very nice job mate. Pretty cool reinterpretation of Metroid IV, personally that was my least favorite game in the entire Metroid series but your little story made it a LOT more bearable, hahaha.

There are a lot of things that were never really explained like Shuzyn's whole history (what? he was a human before?) and how he and Samus met, but that doesn't seem necessary in the greater scheme of things. So long as our favorite Battle Couple continues to have lots of awesome sex :D

What I'm wondering is what happened to the rest of the X species, I don't remember if you wrote that SR388 blew up or not. I think an epilogue would be a great idea, plus I'm sure Sammy wants some more hot action with her sis and Shu YEAH

i dont know what happened. you used to be a magnificant writer, what went wrong? the plot is fantastic, but it looks like you got lazy typing it up! GOD, please dont turn into one of those people who thinks up an increadible plot only to do it disgrace in the story with a sea of erors! please think these ideas of yours through.

well I don't mind it took so long i'm patent so no worrys and I am quite pleased with this chapter and hope that it only gets better from here on.

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shuzyn...
you...lucky...BASTARD!
this is insane. beautifully written, but insane. i dont think i really want to be shuzyn right now,(although the urge is there) i think that, in the future, he is going to get raped. repeatedly. my theory also says that it is going to hurt. and here i thought that sammy was going to sacrifice herself for samus! this ff is about to get VERY good and sexy, VERY fast!
keep updating! je tu amour!

man i'm seriosuly enjoying this story, honestly I don't see anything wrong with it, though I try to to help the auther best I can. granted chapters are long but thats a good thing, keeps the readers busy but costs a lot of time for the auther. fair tradeoff in my opanion.

that aside I can't wait for the next chapter and don't forget, take all the time you need.

hm final boss is a metroid no doubt...im guessing a mutated queen or some strange hybrid you created, either way i fear for cute sammy if she gets caught in the restricted sector...ouchie all those metroids hungry for her cute flesh m tasty XD few words eaten here and there so go over it again and patch it asap XD. till next time XD

another brilliant chapter, thank you for FINALLY making it available. and at the end of the chapter something was mentioned that gave me the impression that this story will not end well for "Sammy". please prove my intuition wrong.
merci

btw,
1) a new definition of a highly graphic romantic intercourse scene has been added to the World Wide Dictionary of Internet Terms due to the sheer blinding awesomeness of this ff:
//origin:lemon
//phrase:massive-big-giant-oh-god-mother-of-all-citrus- fruits (or for short: "MBGOGMOACF")

2)did i mention update?

3)i totally agree with Jack; there should be at least a little bit of a "menage et trois" involved.

4)however, i would personally enjoy another one of those mbgogmoacf's that pop up once every other chapter

last) je tu amour

UPDATE PLEZ?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
I LOVE YOU!

wow i love the chapter...let shu have both girls man having two samus is like a dream come true for any samus fan XD hope they come to a good deal and i hope they tag team a super boss of sweet design...till next time

PS: revise the story, few errors here and there with tense

I vote threesome complete with Eiffel Tower. Hell yeah.

(Check on urbandictionary if you don't get it.)

hm i have my suspicions but il hold em off for later. hope sa-x survives and her and sammy get to either share the poor guy or go separate ways( im pretty sure he would die if he had to please both) either way i want the 3 to kill federation bastards, it would pwn

damn great chapter. lol love the SA-X's growth. im currently working on a metroi/stargate atlantis xover and i have a beaten and ruised SA-X which im thinking of making more human( the core x absorbing so much of the human dna in it to the poin it it forgets to infect humans and kill them) and make her sentient. a bit of help with personality cause im thinking of makign both samus and her clone a bit of a pair( i know wierd) still i love that ur goign to make shu stronger. a space dragon needs to get stronger since it needs to dominate the female. even if it is a hot bouny hunter that likes to tame him LOL. next chap plz i want to know what he gets

like it!
pretty well written aside from a couple of typos.. I wish you would've given at least some more background on your character, I like him, but wish we got to know more about his past and stuff.
please go on :)