Wow, that was really well done and clever!

I hadn't read the word count/noticed that there were no chapters, so I was expecting a long fic (don't know why, exactly. I just read a lot of long fics - and it was written with the ability of someone who could write a long plotty story) so when it ended I was dissapointed!

But I've added it to my favourites, and thank you for writing it. :)

This is a great story. So many Harry Potter stories just throw in some bit of magic to make things work without thinking through even the simplest consequences of the magic, but the best stories are about consequences not about an author shoving toys around.

Sad story!

Really beautifully written, and an extremely realistic representation of what would probably actually happen. Things just wouldn't go back to normal, although I can see it not being such a huge deal if the yougner was de-aged - such as Harry, and Severus was the 'father'. And you wrote Harry really well, how he felt about losing his 'son'.

Nice take on a de-aging fic!

PLESE WRIGHT MORE! love the story!

It's very sweet! It's a pity that you didn't developped this story in many chapters x3

I feel like crying. lol. I loved it ^^

Great story, so sweet! Love it.

I love this de-age version of yours. I think been a short one-shot suits the story setting.

Well, your "version" did seem more realisic... It was sad nevertheless. Couldn't they find a way to still be a family?
I'm always shocked when Severus adopts Harry just to bugger him as soon as he's back in his true age. As if "parental" feelings and "carnal love" feelings were quite the same! Even as a Draco/Harry fic that's creepy! For this I liked this fic but I wouldn't mind a little OS few weeks or years later, just to know theyr'e all right...
Tell meif you decide to write it!
See you maybe
Solstice

that was the most gorgess story i have read. it even made me cry! keep up the fantastic writting.

I like your take on the old de age story. I would of like more of it...not so subtle hint for sequel request

This is fantastic! It was sad and hopeful at the same time . . . you managed to put a lot of emotion into a very short story. Excellent work. ;)

As a parent, I believe you have caught the perfect essence of how a parent responds at the loss of a child. Bravo!