hey, this story may be old ;) but it's pretty good for an eleven year old...I couldn't even talk English then so it's good ;) maybe you should write more now you are more experienced :p anyway :d good work

Hey , that's good for eleven years old. When I was eleven ...wait , I can't remember being eleven. That's so sad.

- Tinfoil

*laughs* Yes this did at least give me a good laugh. It was cute and it is better than the things I wrote at eleven years old. Thanks for sharing.