This was a wonderful, thoughtful story. I especially enjoyed reading Dinobot's notes (it really think he would have been that eloquent in his narration, he always was something of a snob, heh). Rattrap's actions were believable, although I would have enjoyed some more insight from Rhinox, Optimus and Cheetor (after all, they interacted with Dinobot too) but I can understand that you wanted to make it chiefly a tale between the two 'rivals'. The only thing I don't buy- Not. One. Little. Bit.- is the whole Earth origin scenario. I can buy the neutral assassin status, even the wife and kiddies part (barely!), but not Earth. No Predacon, Decepticon, or cobbled together version of the two would EVER have any dealings with the inhabitants of a planet responsible for their loss of the Great War. Other than that, it was a pretty good read.

Sniff. I loved this story. It's so well written and everyone's in character.

I cried on the episode where Dinobot died. "He lived as a warrior, died a hero"

R.I.P. Dinobot.

Goodness, it's been forever since I saw BW, but this was very touching. Very melancholy...I'd forgotten about Rattrap and Dinobot...*sigh*

You understand Dinobot's character so well...He's very proud of you, I'm sure. Another beautiful story, Sinead. Amazingly detailed and very original. I loved the exerts from the Covenant of Primus. It was amazingly well thought and written. I hope to read more of your writing soon!

Oh wow! This was so good in every way. You portrayed all of the characters beautifully. I especially love how you captured Rattrap's grief and his friendship with both Rhinox and Dinobot. It's just the way I wish they had ended Dinobot's tale on Beast Wars. Thank you very much for this!