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| Kitty2211 2008-04-19 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. Incredibly beautiful. It's hard to capture both characters, but you did a splendid job. Keep it up! |
| kingleby 2007-07-01 ch 1, | abuseso sweet ^_^ |
| Audley 2007-03-17 ch 1, | abuseThat made me BURST with happiness. I love your portrayal of San--the way her emotions are sort of all over the place is perfect for her, as well as her general aggression. But she and Ashitaka know each other inside and out, so the only thought is: "No worries there." I think they could pull through most anything.^^ |
| Bambolieblue 2006-10-28 ch 1, | abuseOhh, this was such a good fic...I thought it really portrayed Ashitaka and San's relationship. What's best about it was the fact that their personalities weren't altered (at least not in my opinion), but it was still so sweet and good. :) |
| ashitaka666 2006-09-21 ch 1, | abuselovely story, to bad its only a oneshot story. I'd say this could turn into a great story if you continued. Dj Ashitaka |
| funkyfairygirl 2006-08-11 ch 1, | abusethat was really well written. liked it very much. |
| Ekonika 2006-07-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow, This is great! I only saw the movie three times, and that was awhile ago. Thank You for writing this, its wonderful! I really enjoyed reading it! ^.^ |
| RAWpassion 2006-07-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is one of the only ff's of this fandom that truly portrays San's and Ashitaka's dilemma correctly without crossing over into the overly fluffy/OOC areas. Congratulations! The dialogue was very true to character and is good enough to stick at the end of the movie. |
| char 2006-06-27 ch 1, anon. | abusethat was very cute |
| Chocolate And Croissants 2006-05-25 ch 1, | abuseThat was a very impressive, affectionate fic. Brava! |
| Spawn of Darkness 2006-04-16 ch 1, | abuserealy good. very emotional. |
| anime/videogame freak 2006-04-01 ch 1, | abuseaw that was a very cyte story i liked it a lot it was good |
| soubi202 2006-03-31 ch 1, | abuseThat was really good. And is it me, or do I seem to be reviewing fanfics that no one has reviewed today? Anyway, I wish the fanfic wasn't over. I have myself thinking about what else you could put. ^.^ |
| M-Warrior 2006-03-28 ch 1, | abuseVery impressive and descriptive. |
| Jules Kelly 2006-03-27 ch 1, | abuseAh, I love Ashitaka and San stories. They are so cute. Anyways, I really do like the story and your writing style. The dialogue was well-written and avoided being mushy and cardboard. There was a lot emotion in this simple scene, and that is something that I really admire. I have no idea if this is just a one-shot or a first chapter, but either way, it's very well-done. |